Please update soon if you can! Love this! I don't mind if Jane Frost is not in this story. Actually, I would prefer if she wasn't. Not that I don't like her, it's that I've never watched iron man and don't know her character very well. No offense to her fans. It's a really great story!

Great so far, I hope you'll start updating again! :)

very intresting.

jane foster didnt do much in the movie. the way i see it she was just added as a romance interest for thor but the erik selvig guy do play a major role in the avenjers. i guess you should make atleast a small cameo of jane and her team of astrophysicists just to introduve the guy.

as i mentioned earlier the changing of flashback scene to present then to the report of romanov and finally to the 3'rd person pov of fury after the line break wiithout forementioned warning was a bit confusing.
you should have mentioned 'flashback' before explaining the clone's pov.

uuh...one more thing. why do you use so many 'linebreaks'? using just one will get the point across to the readers lol.

Hmm nice story! the only problem is the quick change in pov and the line break. it was a bit confusing at first you should have mentioned whose pov was that after the linebreak ,but all in all the chapter is great and love the au ben in the story :)

I really liked the meeting between Ben and Natasha and I don't mind Jane not appearing.

I don't mind the absence of Jane Foster. She never contributes much.

Great start, this can go anywhere.

I like the idea, lets see where this goes.

I like the 1st person narrative. Keep it up!

Crazy awesome, bro. Really, I find myself reading every fandom you write in...maybe we are long lost twins.

I can't wait to read more!

Great start! Is Ben going to have a love interest?

Excellent start!