This is one of the best stories I have read and I love the way you added the imprint in.

Hi,
I absolutely love this story! I'm team Jacob all the way and this makes me very happy :D Everything truly made sense and it was easy to read.
This was a perfect find.
Thank you for writing this and taking it all the way to the end.

I loved this so so much!

What is it with little boys and reptiles, bugs, aquatic things, and just plain things that don’t need to come in the house? Lmao. You want a reptile for a pet, don’t take it from nature! This was fun. I enjoyed seeing how you figured out ways to ensure she would end up with Jacob.

I knew as soon as they said he was a troublemaker that they were naming him after Paul. Lmao. And it certainly made him speechless but I doubt that lasted very long. *cackles madly*

Thank goodness. And look at Bella being all modern and asking Jake to marry her. Lol. Cheeky thing she is huh? With her “when”.

Her touching the mark is what brought Jake down, I can only hope it’ll be what helps him find her. Please don’t let that sick bastard kill her or her baby. He’s even creepier than Aro

She’s pregnant. I had a thought as Charlie was talking to Jake about no more kids for a while and Jake says basically “what will be will be”. Her body isn’t normal. She heals so much faster. Which means, to me at least, a shot of birth control that would react normally with a regular woman wouldn’t with her. Whatever protein gives her the fast healing probably interfered with it and they just didn’t know or think about that possibility. I just wonder if it ended early, or didn’t work at all. Lol. Charlie is going to be so mad. ;)

I don’t like the way he said interesting. What was interesting? What did he see, hear, smell? What was it? Jesus that was intense, but the pack moved and reacted as a unit and that is fantastic. They’ll be prepared for anything really. Edward is still an idiot douche

I hope this wasn’t all a ruse. Alice was so apologetic about what Edward did and it’s not something that can just be brushed off like that. He always was her favorite but would she be able to put her mate at risk for Edward?

Oh Quil, you are not that irresistible. Lmao. Idk if I trust them going to Port Angeles. I just feel as if something is going to happen and it feels like Alice set it up, or maybe Edward does.

I get they’re teenagers and sex is all some teens think about, but I woulda been more upset over the revelation of when that annulment was procured. Technically, she wasn’t married to Edward from the day he got it. So all that time he kept going “she’s my wife”, she really wasn’t. And he led all those people to their deaths for no damn reason. She has even more right to hate him now.

There’s no way in hell I would trust Edward with that child. No way. Look at the lengths he went to to keep Bella. He lied to her about her shield and kept her from her true mate, he led people to their slaughter, and brought a true monster into their midst. What’s to say he wouldn’t use Edge to get to her, to force her to stay with him. No, he’s better off dead.

Wow. Just...wow. Idk wtf Edward thinks he’s doing but wow. All those revelations from Charlie are interesting. This vampire has no remorse for humans. I doubt it’s anyone like Garrett or most of the Cullen’s friends. Most of them feed from humans but they wouldn’t ever torture them like that. Could it be Joham? Or maybe one of the Volturi? Joham fancies himself a scientist, surely he has basic medical knowledge if not more. Hmmmmm

Yeah Jake, yeah he is. And now I’m thinking that none of the others know. Carlisle would never condone it, Rose, Emmett, and Jasper would rip him apart. Esme would be heartbroken, and Alice. Well, she’s the only one I think that would make excuses for him, try to help, or just be “very disappointed” in him. I thought of another thing I wonder he might be doing. Could he be trying to turn himself human? If he thinks that’s what she wants more that being a vamp, he’d try wouldn’t he?