Great. You typed read instead of red though. May want to change that ;-)

Nice twists to the plot :-)

Yayyayayy! A longer chapter! Thanks for updating :)

I'm always soo excited when I see for this Story! Thanks for updating :)

Good stuff. Great work

Great work but be careful to avoid too much modern slang/phrases. Can't explain why but it just feels slightly odd like that

Please, please, please keep writing this series. Not only is it one of the most well written fan fics i have ever read, but you are also very respectful of the original Merlin characters and you have portrayed Mordred perfectly.

Why not write a fic in this series for 5x11 or 5x6, i think these episodes would be very interesting if 'magic reigned free.'

To recap, please keep writing this series, it is amazing:)

Glad you kept to the storyline of Merlin loosing his magic :-)

Good work. I like the fact the two magic users are getting on. Having Mordred painted as a murderer in nearly every fic is a little sad.

Nice twist

Well both attacked - interesting !

I can't wait to see where your headed with your story!