Oh, my goodness, this was so deep. Very well done, inviting the reader to delve more. It is too bad about IK and Marion, but she really couldn't expect anything longterm or permanent because that's not the nature of the man; even if he wished, he couldn't commit solely to her, concidering his work and career. The side issue of Napoleon caring enough for his friend and associate to wish better accomodations for him was a bonus. Sharp details and keenly true to character dialogue - fantastic.

Congrats on the ponytail, I do so approve of it. Fine first installment, and very much the Marion/Illya relationship I always envision, which is to say doomed. I am now patiently waiting for the next entry.

Rosy, the story is wonderful... I enjoyed helping a little... It was such fun to spend some time with Sabi. I cannot wait to hear what everyone thinks as the story unfolds.

Rosy, this story is wonderful and I am so proud to be a small part of it. Thanks for letting me add my two or three cents! It was fun to spend some time with Sabi! :)

Love it makes the world go around and hopefully for the guys it happens. Nice start.

A wonderful prequel to your saga and beautifully written. I feel for Marion and Illya and the tenderness of their final meeting is very moving. Napoleon's efforts and the reasons behind his need for Illya to be happy are obvious and realistic and it's good to meet up with Sabi again although I cannot avoid thinking of the future for her. Write more soon please.