hehehe true I like it, although in the original version felicity she told him that if they couldn't do that, he shouldn't kiss her

oh shit, is that there It is careless. he is 30 and she 17 and already doing internships ?

oh shit 12 years is 12 years, not 5 or 10 years ... the plot looks interesting I will continue reading

Lindo amei parabéns

This is the only arrow fanfic I like that doesn't have oliver as the hood.

One of the BEST stories I have ever read in FanFiction!

This is waaaaay late, but I'm gonna join with the 'not an age issue' group! Some of the first fanfics I read on here were Severus and Hermione who have a 19 year difference, so I say that if she's of age, go for it! So far, aside from Sara (No), I'm loving this story! I like how they always get put into awkward situations, and Thea's approval was the icing on the cake!

This story is so good that I've decided to read it again!

If this is your first story, then WOW. I have enjoyed it immensely! You characterizations of Oliver, Felicity and Digg were spot on for me.

I only have a couple of constructive criticisms.

1. Be careful of the your/you're, their/they're/there, to/too type of words. There are a number of those errors.

2. You had Oliver getting grazed by a bullet in the warehouse fight. However you don't mention it at all after that.

You left in in tears in more than a few places and smiling over and over again. The smut was also right on point.

All in all great story!

Ellen

Omg that ending is the best!

Ty for this awesome story. Its my fav in olicity stories .goodjob and ty again.

Goodluck

This was so good...in every way. As far as the age difference; well I don't think it was the 12 year difference that really bothered readers as the actual age of them both when they got together. When my daughter was 18 if she started dating a 30 year old I would be very concerned as would anyone I am 100% positive. I know Felicity would not be your average 17 going on 18 year old, but still. Most kids at that age have no clue. Give them 4 years and they have matured so much. Like around the age of Felicity when the show started. Would've been more acceptable just as a maturity standpoint. Because the older each party is when they begin the May December romance the more accepted it is. I should know. At 35 I married a 25 yr old. As far as your story...well written, engrossing and I loved it.

Hey,
I would like to thank you that you have shared this wonderful story with us.
I’m not bothered with the age difference. It is right that in young ages the difference is more eye-catching, but they older they are it’s not really important anymore.
You need incredibly 10 Chapters until Felicitys 18. Birthday and for the first kiss :) I’m glad that Oliver has his concerns thrown overboard and that Thea has no problem with this relationship.
The end was a little too quick for me. I have missed some important things. How all the others react to this relationship or when Felicity left for MIT, …
But we can’t have all :)
Bye sunseren

I think I've read this fic already before but anyway I read everything again today. Such a great fic. Thank you thank you!

Ho...ly...crap. Yes, I binge read this. I am just stunned. Your ability to capture the characters voices (I could hear, in my head, Stephen, Emily, David and Willa's voices speaking your lines) is phenomenal. I adore how you wove in dialog and situations/locations from the show. The lemons, while I realize you weren't confident in writing those, were exceptional. The slow burn was perfect and just added to the eventual passion. Blown...away. Kudos!