Excellent as always I love the way you portray Vette in this one.

Thanks for the follow. I'm swamped right now but I'll try to comment on this story when I find the time.

nice I knew he couldn't have a family it would tame him the cloak thing is a little over the top but as long as he doesn't use it for every little thing its cool I cant wait to see how this affects his future

Creepy... I have to admit that I did not see this coming. Well done.

I would offer up my services as a grammar beta, but I'm not that good and I don't believe I'm qualified for it. sorry. I can give you some pointers if you want? Or help correct some grammatical errors?

awesome chapter so worth the wait

poor maleficent if he knew this would happen maybe he really would have killed the kid I think he nyeklas should be moderately dark side ruthless and destructive but not to the point where it interferes with battles or fighting the republic as for force powers I don't know maybe several different ones from each class while being primarily a warrior also will this follow the sith warrior story line or will you use it as a rough outline and go if into your own direction?

Wow, talk about getting manipulated... Lol. Awesome chapter, can't wait for more!

I am really enjoying this story :D
But I have to wonder if Nyeklas is going to be DS, LS or neutral (I personally would like to see him neutral sided because it gives you more flexibility on what you want him to do)

Interesting story, can't wait to see where you go with this...

so far i really like this fic very original i like that D

this has promise...