| Reviews for His Mate |
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  Guest chapter 21 . 7/13 The fic is really intriguing, and anyone who reads it would be curious on every chapter that comes because of all the dramatic cliffhangers. The author’s a good storyteller, and in my own opinion, the author can make his or her own book, but if writing’s just a guilty pleasure that’s okay. The pace of the story is good, but you should be aware about the usage of some words, like your and you’re, wouldn’t elaborate that because it’s basic, and given that you said that it’s your first fanfic here in FFN it’s okay to make some small mistakes. You should also be aware when to break into paragraphs, especially on this last chapter, I know when you’re reading on a computer it tends to be stretched? And when you’re using the phone your paragraph seems like it’s an endless paragraph that you can’t see where it will end. The story’s not bad, and as I said earlier you are a good storyteller and I hope you make more stories that will improve your writing skills! Thank you for sharing your story! :) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/13 I’m not really a fan of the idea of “Lisanna’s there again and Lucy is just a replacement” and I’m not really a fan of fanfics with an OC, but this story intrigued me, and Jason is a likeable character. |
 fairygirl21 chapter 21 . 6/17 I hate the fact that she's taking part of the blame.. It's totally Natsu's fault. If he hadn't lied then she wouldn't have had to lie either. Cool story tho |
| Den201 chapter 21 . 7/31/2019 I-I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu *dies* PLEASE FINISH IT |
| Belle chapter 21 . 3/25/2019 I loved this story, wish it had a chapter were she given birth the to child. |
| Daph chapter 10 . 2/12/2019 AH THE TEARS |
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/1/2019 I know that Lucy is very forgiving, but I wish that she was little more harsh and less of insulting herself. Other than that, your story is amazing and made me cry- then again, I'm just overly emotional. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/28/2018 The tear flow was enormous considering its practically 3:00 in the morning |
| MissVarta chapter 11 . 10/28/2018 GODDAMN ERZA O.O |
| MissVarta chapter 10 . 10/28/2018 I mean could you blame her, Natsu? You acted like your night together didn’t happen TT I just hope he doesn’t do anything stupid, like idk, getting shitfaced and knocking up another woman... |
| MissVarta chapter 9 . 10/28/2018 Dun dun dun I wonder when we’ll get to see Jason’s powers... |
| MissVarta chapter 1 . 10/27/2018 Natsu you piece of shit |
| Morino chapter 16 . 8/11/2018 Oh God oh God She messed up badly |
| Morino chapter 9 . 8/11/2018 He was about to say mate |
| abdee chapter 21 . 4/16/2018 i hope there is an epilog, maybe.. |
