I really like this fic. It's well written and the details are well though. Except for the fact that sesshoumaru is ooc but I am sure you have your reasons and plot in your head. I tried reading some of your earliest work and I can clearly see your progress and evolution to a better writer. I really hope that you will find time and inspiration to update. It would be s pity to leave such a gem still. I rarely find good time travel or rewrite of inuyasha canon. I can count them on the fingers of my hand. Please update!
Thx in advance!

Thanks for not abandoning this. As another reviewer stated, this story is incredibly underappreciated. Excellent story. I look forward to when you come back to finish this. Hope you're well and thanks for sharing!

Awesome story

This is great! A story of “what if Kagome was older, wiser, stronger when she was brought to feudal era” well, it made a huge difference! Shikon’s not shattered and she handles Inuyasha even better than she did. I didn’t expect the Shikon to disappear so quickly in the story though cuz it seemed like it totally connected to Kag (calling it back from the centipede was awesome btw) and was somewhat sentient, craving to be with her.

I loved the omake - Sess got rid of Naraku so easily haha. And you’ve got me intrigued - why is Sess following/caring about/helping Kag…what’s the thread linking them…and that barrier, was that Kag’s…what is that pink orb from the Shikon that was absorbed into Kag? Why did he buy that trinket for Kag and what was that emotion in his eyes (I had a mini fangirl moment there with the “be sure to take care” lol)… Souta’s great too and I’m not a fan of Rin in FF as I am in the anime as she tends to be portrayed as annoying than cute, and her presence doesn’t seem to add but detracts from the story but I liked your Rin and agree she’s good to have in the story for Sess’ sake. Kag’s lovely too and I can’t wait to see SessKag develop. It would also be nice to see some of Sess’ POV - he’s taking everything so well (about the link, knowing Kag’s from the future and came through the well), made me wonder what he was thinking when he heard youkais may not exist in the future… This is a well written lovely piece of work. I could see the improvement over your old story too. Hope you’re well and I hope you’ll finish this story.

Just a minor discrepancy fyi in c16 - Kagome went back to get Inu’s clothes from the mouth of the cave and dries them by the fire, and later Sess retrieves Inu’s clothes which Kagome had left at the front of the cave.

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Looking forward to another chapter! Please write more soon.

What a well written story. Just a bit of time for kagome to grow more mature and the entire plotline changes for the better. I love it.

This story is incredibly unappreciated. Personally I've always been annoyed at Kagome for being so whiny and meh, but I guess that comes with the territory of being a teenager. I love this understanding, patient, and intuitive Kagome! And not to mention the budding romance between our favorite lord and miko. ;) seriously can't wait for your next update!

Hey! :)
Just wanted to say this is turning out to be a great story. When I first started reading this I was bored with the same details but I continued and found it changed after a while and loved it. It is interesting and I can't wait for the next update. I admire the sort of sibling relationship between Inu and Kag you made. Also, with them cuddling up to Sesshomaru? Priceless. :) I am VERY curious to see why Sessomaru is following them and why exactly he wants her well and what he knows that they don't. Again, can't wait or new update. :)

Omg an update!
Thank you!

Kagome Sesshoumaru bonding has taken place. In small amounts, BUT IT HAS! I have seen it. Thank you for the update!

I enjoyed that thoroughly.

it was quite slow for me to get into as I was impatient for new information and for splits from the plot but I find that near the end of this chapter I was enjoying your more real Kagome.

Where has this amazing story been hiding! I found the needle in the haystack! I love your version of the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

I have enjoyed reading your story and look forward to future updates.