This one was a tear jerker.
I love the relationship that Stef and Callie have and this one shot was absolutely perfect in difining that.
The small details of when Stef took Callie's hands or when Callie's body molded with stef's are always right in que and blend with the story wonderfully.
Beautiful one shot!

I love this story! I hope you write more stef and Callie bonding! It's great

I LOVE THIS 3 This was perfect and I wish it was in the show, I love Stef/Callie moments! The finale was CRAZY. But anyway, this was super well written and I love all of your stuff and SO GLAD IT WAS THETBONE'S BIRTHDAY hahaha :) 3 Stef and Callie's relationship is awesome, they're both so similar :) 3
xx Sage

Oh Stef and Callie! No way to get to my heart faster than with the two of those! I really do love Kelly and the foster mom's! I figured there was a missing seeing here somewhere! Kelly really needed a mom hug! Great job

I'm SO glad it's TheTBone's birthday!:-p This was perfectly beautiful (and we needed it after the finale!).

I really enjoyed this. I'm still feeling some turmoil from the finale, so this was like a soothing balm. Stef's voice was absolutely spot-on. You had her endearments, physical expressions of caring, all of it. I really liked how you brought out the out-of-control element Callie would be feeling in regards to her biological dad. I was looking at it from another angle, so this was an interesting idea. Stef's humor mixed with her gentleness at the end really brought it home. Thank you.

Loved this so much! The stef and Callie bonding was amaIng! And I love how you brought up bits of the past were Callie has felt loved but also slightly scare of how much stef loved her! I like how you didn't make stef just fix everything, she understood that she couldn't make a promise that Callie would never feel alone but she could promise he would never be alone! It was a great post ep! Good job:)

Very nice. Still alittle upset over her not getting adopted.

Damn, I never noticed this, but the way you write Stef is exactly the way she's written in the show. Like, her speech patterns. (Apart from a few British-isms, anyway.) As usual, this story is touching and well done and great. I wish we'd seen this moment in canon, so thanks for capturing it.

Oh, I loved this! My heart breaks for Callie.

This was great!
You did a terrific job :)

I hadn't even thought of Jude being her half-brother; it totally didn't even occur to me. I loved this spin u did on the episode. It kind of surprised me that this didn't actually happen, or something like it anyway. It just seems like something the moms would do. Then again, I thought the writers wouldn't do the baby thing...but I digress. All i'll say about that is Stef's words at the beginning on the subject matter came from my heart. Anyway, loved the Stef/Callie moment :) And I loved the ending. That is progress, and it better be shown in S2. Y'know, along w/more family elements...I digress once more. Lovely job! :D

Awwwwwwww this was so,ugh, I don't know what it was. I have so many emotions.

This is exactly what I wish we had seen on the show. I LOVED it- I had tears in m eyes just reading it. I absolutely adore Stef and Callie's relationship and think you captured it perfectly. Thank you!

Very nice. I was really hoping this would happen last night or something like this but it didn't. I really hope Callie gets a break next season! This was a very touching scene to read and you did an amazing job of capturing Stef. Also, Stef intimidating Wyatt was priceless. :)