Love all the angst in this chapter!
Jack's reaction was spot on.

Great story!

Great place to propose to her! Though I kind wished Elsa were the one to ask it hehe.

Hey great chapter!

I think you wrote Jack's and Elsa's reasonings very well, with both seeing their possible mistakes. I am glad that Elsa said sorry to Jack because ultimately, no matter what she chose to do, Jack deserved to know beforehand.

I had thought she was pregnant for a while hehe! I hope she will talk to Jack first about it.

Enjoying this story so far.
I like how you write Jack and Elsa.

Read this story again because I felt like it. Still as great as I remembered it to be!

finally she realises her mistakes and apologized thank god everything is solve now and jake also confessed his mistakes

oh wait a minute jack when you found out that elsa doesn't want baby you will be blackout for sure

well you know I'm glad what happened to elsa she deserves this after all she's being selfish

Jack always with her even her toughest times he brought her a scooter he gives her cash or she wasn't done anything for him.. now she thought he is cheating on her what a stupid woman she is. now she is with hans in his car at 3 a.m wow such a idiotic selfish girl she is.. she knows how much jack loves her and his past and already she doesn't want a child or marry him.. i don't like this elsa seriously she doesn't wants to know whats the truth but just jump on the conclusions and decide to leave him alone at fucking 3 in the morning

Wow. I know I'm a little late to the game, but wow. I read this in one day and I have to say : job well done. I haven't read a fanfic room that loved so much I hated it(at the emotional moments I mean)in a very long time. God this fandom is too great. You, my friend, are born to be a writer! I don't think I've ever hated or loved Elsa so much in a fanfic. Thank you. I needed something good in my life right now. :)

Oh, thank god that a**hole had that happen to him. Now he knows how it feels... A**hole. Sorry. I HATE Hans with a passion. But you're doing awesome. I like how you write, and explain what's going on.

Is it wrong that after I read this I automatically went and made myself a Vegemite and tuna sandwich? It was good. Like this story.

That was ending was so sweet! I loved it so much! Great story!