Reviews for White Rabbit
Guest chapter 13 . 4/9/2018
Love this story. I have read it several times and keep hoping that you will be inspired to add more. It is defiantly a favorite. Such a great take on what should of happened. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/3/2017
Still hoping for more of this wonderful story.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/22/2016
Ole please ole please finish this. I had read it before. Just reread it the last two days and I am officially rehooked! It's amazing!
GUEST chapter 13 . 11/7/2016
Just wanted to let you know I would still be interested in reading more of this wonderful story if you every get the notion to finish it. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/20/2016
DUDE WHY THE HELL HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED THIS... THIS IS GOLD I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU HAVEN'T CONTINUED THIS... WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?! I NEED MORE! PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!
Charloe Forever chapter 13 . 3/4/2016
Love this and often reread. Please surprise us with an update. This store ids a favorite.
LucyLo085 chapter 12 . 2/14/2016
Ole please ole please finish this. I had read it before. Just reread it the last two days and I am officially rehooked! It's amazing!
Claire chapter 13 . 1/17/2016
Please update. Love love this story. Still hoping for more.
GUEST chapter 13 . 11/20/2015
Love the story. Really hope you get the urge to finish it. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2015
(I apologize in advance for writing much more than is probably appropriate for a comment)
Ok, I realize I'm late to the party but.. Wow. This story. This is the best fan fiction I've ever read. Absolutely love everything about it. So intense. You are really talented, your writing is so good. I might even call you a genius. How you shift between the real world and their dreams/flashbacks. Ingenious. The way you perfectly describe their feelings for each other, their chemistry, body language and the interaction between them, the scenery and surroundings. The dialogue is just perfect as well. It always feels exactly like the Charlie and Bass we saw in the series, but better. Never out of character. In a good way. I love how you portrayed the characters and captured their different reactions and feelings in situations together. I never got disappointed. Even when it is heartbreaking, I don't mind. In fact, that is what makes this story so good, mixed with all their happy moments in the dreamworld of course. Their love, in both worlds, at happy times and sad times, never fails to convince me. I am hoping for a happy ending though. To be honest, emotionally I'm not sure I could handle anything else. Lol. But either way, I am grateful and prepared for whatever you chose to write. You really have an ability to convey emotions in a way that it goes straight to the heart, so real and raw. And just like only the greatest of loves, you feel absolute euphoria and absolute hopelessness as a reader.

Honestly, I feel depressed knowing I will never experience this exact epic love story for myself. But it is worth it, as I clearly have given up my life for the moment devoting myself to this story. I'm begging you to continue and finish the story. And I ain't even ashamed of it. I feel like you made me an addict and now you have taken away my drug. Also, you even managed to put in my favorite song of all time, "I'm on fire" with Bruce Springsteen. I won't lie, I nearly lost it at that point. The music and the lyrics, carefully chosen, written down in just the right place. The timing. Again, just perfect. This whole story is just pure perfection. Incredible.

Anyway, wanted to comment, show my appreciation and thank you for the story. :) I really hope you continue!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/27/2015
I hope you continue this story-it's amazing and I'm dying to know what happens next!
Fan chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
Please need more of this wonderful story.
Jane chapter 13 . 8/21/2015
Love this story. Still hoping you have plans to continue. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/31/2015
That's really a great story ! Are you going to continue it ?
Guest chapter 13 . 6/21/2015
This story is great. I know it has been over a year since you have updated, but I am holding out hope you still have plans to finish. The story flows so well even though you have the dream world mixing with the real world. Please consider continuing, love it. Thanks for writing.
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