Fantastic story!You captured Liz and Red's characters to perfection.I adore the sexy banter between them,I can actually picture this scenario happening on the is great writing, thank you loved it. LIZ&RED FOREVER..

I love the banter between the two of them, even during very serious moments and heavy topics. The heat between them is palpable. You have a beautiful way with descriptions, making the reader feel every emotion in each scene. Awesome story!

If only it was that easy.

please write a sequel

I love it and really hope there is more to come

Oh good lord, seriously, way too many things to try to comment on here. Umm... let's see.

Really good. Very well-written.

Enjoyed the idea of Red having to distract himself from the events of Lizzie's wedding day.

Him stopping and then cheekily demanding a kiss again was probably my favorite part. :) Rarely do we get believable dialogue that's angsty, and sexy, with a little bit of humor thrown in that doesn't feel forced, but that was great.

Awesome story!

Perfect description of Red's short hair being petted against the grain. :)

I *loved* the hesitance to kiss each other. His request for it was a great way for him to show her what he wanted but at the same time allow her to be completely in control of making the first move. And the response of, "Not exactly what I meant, but we can work with that," was perfect! I can hear him say that, with a little smile on his face.

Nice job.

"I'm not sure you realize what I'm implying." GOOD line. No, GREAT line. I love that even though the way he meant it and the way you wrote the outcome was sexual, it could just as easily have been Red threatening to take Tom out back and shoot him. You've captured the vague, eloquent way Red speaks very well.

Loving this so far. :)

One question: why your characters always have unprotected sex? Your fanfics are almost perfect, but this choice is... gross. It's a bad example, bad message to the readers. Other than that, your writing is incredible.

Great observation regarding the timeline of hitchhiking... This chapter was almost perfect: except the unprotected sex part.

I really like your voice, the way you put words together.

That was ..nice! Loved the story ,only wish there could be more..but then I am greedy!Thank you!

‘A sad, naked man wandering around…nowhere to hide an ax.” Laughed out loud at that.
Even as they’re stripping one another, they have such a comfortable conversation going with one another. Something about that is really natural, really them.
He WOULD break into her Netflix account. I bet he’s thrown all kinds of crap into her Netflix queue, too.
This was smutty and perfectly in-character and wow, just incredible. INCREDIBLE.

When I read this fic I open a word doc so I can take notes as I go along. It is THAT good.

Allowing Liz to still want to defend her husband is very human, and it’s nice to see Liz as someone who isn’t so polarized in this.
You know I totally get the sense that Red would love to be physically touched.
The visual of him slumping forward at her words and pressing her head into his is heartbreakingly beautiful. That whole segment is.
YOU ADDRESSED THE PEDESTAL!
His clothing as armor yes yes yes yes Liz would totally be into watching him take it off.
Oh Liz you both do need it but that might not be the right thing to say to him.
UNF, that was a tense chapter!

And round 2 begins ;-)