Are you ever going to add a new chapter to this? I really wanna see Hitomi chew Van out.

Hello there,
i have read all 7 chapters & i have to say that it's a really good job!
Please tell us that you will update SOON because it looks to me like you have gone hiatus for good, and it would be a great shame if you leave it at such a good time! :(
I look forward for your next chapters! :)

love this story please update it soon please

i really hope you can continue this story soon please

update please please I beg you, seriously I'd like to see what's gonna happen between Van and Hitomi

peace

I would love to check your beta-reader! Please, if only for this story! I love it because VAn and Hitomi are a good couple.

hey, i really like ur story, i think u def captured the esence of the characters. i was just wonderin is this where ur story ends? i look 4ward to the next update if ur continuing with this story. keep up the good work!

update pweeze

great story so far one of the better ones I have read If you write more I would love to read it Update soon

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OMG THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! DONT ABANDON IT! *begs* pllzz finish and update soon!

OMG I love your story, can you please please please update soon? I know its been awhile since your last update but I can't help it, I just love your story!

Don't you dare abandon this fic! It's a really great fic and it shouldn't go to waste. )

*cries* WHEN ARE YOU GOING 2 UPDATE? THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TOO BEAUTIFUL TO LEFT UNFINISHED, TO LET GO TO WASTE! YOU MUST FINISH IT! UPDATE!

oh such an interestin fic please update soon!