| Reviews for On the Passion's Playground |
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   phineashiccup chapter 9 . 2/2 That was cute. Can't wait to read another chapter |
| EdeatheDemonFox chapter 9 . 1/17/2016 Oh dear Arceus, they were all sexy as F. My favorites, though, I think were Laughter and Jealousy. Laughter because that's so adorable to be in the middle of sex and find something so hilariously funny but because the love never leaves, the pleasure doesn't take a back seat either. Like...yes. 1,000 times yes! |
| 3D waffle chapter 3 . 12/26/2015 This was nice. |
| 3D waffle chapter 2 . 12/26/2015 It too bad that it's short but it's still good. |
| 3D waffle chapter 1 . 12/26/2015 Maaaaann this was good! It got me excited. |
| MindCanaries5 chapter 2 . 8/15/2015 I love the balance of the control that you write between these two. The dynamic is so characteristic for them. And I can't get over your sentence structure. It's so varied that it makes the story easy and fun to read. Well, lot's of things make this fun to read. Particularly, "passion that swallows the time and place around them" was an effective description, especially with your risky, exciting setting. I'm just so in love with this! |
| MindCanaries5 chapter 1 . 8/15/2015 Ok so first, I love the energy of this! Tension drips from the writing and- uniquely the structure. Like I love the form of this chapter, especially the break in the middle, which I've never really seen before. It's understated and new and that contrast is so complex and yet complementing? Like the realm of reality and imagination blend. I also love the way it's written as vivid, exact moments. The visuals of the scenes are so sharp and you even capture their emotions in it. I'm also fond of Ash's cute little kiss at the end and that Gary's cuddling doesn't fit the stereotypical, top-is-the-big-spoon, rigid format. Sneaky palletshipping is one of the hottest forms of it and I love this little peek into their secret, hushed world! |
| Coffee Craft chapter 1 . 6/9/2014 He he , this fulfills a lot of my fantasies for these two - 1, 2, 3, and 7 particularly. ;) I hope to see more of this, you are a talented writer and artist! (I've seen your art on Tumblr!) |
| ZoosmellPooplord chapter 7 . 4/26/2014 Please keep writing my friend c: |
| ZoosmellPooplord chapter 5 . 4/26/2014 My name is Zoosmell Pooplord and I approve of this fanfiction |
| ZoosmellPooplord chapter 3 . 4/26/2014 Daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn |
| ZoosmellPooplord chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Hella |
| The Sassy Master chapter 7 . 4/24/2014 So hawt. I liked them all. Update soon! |
| Chaobaby95 chapter 7 . 3/30/2014 Ok now I can't just choose a favorite anymore, they're all just too good! x33 |
| Chaobaby95 chapter 6 . 3/29/2014 This is the best thing ever because I saw a recent post on Tumblr about laughing while doing the deed and this chapter reminded me so much of it xD so cute :3 |
