I really enjoyed this fanfiction! I liked that you didn't dwell to much on the torture, because it can sometimes be really gory, also the whole vulnerable-Crowley thing makes me kind of uncomfortable, so I like that you down played it. I full on cried at the end though, when they kissed. it was just too cute! Please do a second part!

I love this so much thank you for writing

This was brilliant; I hope you plan on continuing the story.

Gracias por la historia, ojala y hubiera una continuación.

This fic gave me two beautiful mental images that occur behind its scenes for which I must thank you. First, Aziraphale summoning his sword from whereever it was stored by holding his right hand out and doing a miracle, like Thor calling Mjolnir. That is a very cool image of the primly suited angel. I imagine it arriving in his hand riding a clap of thunder and promptly springing to flaming life. Gorgeous! Second, Aziraphale single-handedly fighting his way through Hell to rescue Crowley, dispatching demons left and right. That is the gentle Guardian of the Eastern Gate as badass as he could be. What an image! It is unusual for a story to conjure as much lingering beauty behind the scenes as in them, and this one does. Well done!

SO This is AWESOME! And May I say you Executed Crowley's torture Perfectly, You didn't make it gory or gross, or even detail what happened to him, which is perfect considering Hell's torture is probably undecidable. It was just beautifully written! and The footnotes where great! and OMG theses two are adorable, and I can totally see this happening!

DAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I want the smutty recovery though...yay fluff. Also, Aziraphale storming Hell and making his way out is pretty damn impressive.

I've no idea what else to say, but this was such a pleasure to read (and pain too, occasionally)
And, well... thank you. Write more, you're good at it :)