OMFG I LOVE IT SO MUCH! The part I loved the most is how Zoro didn't mind the idea of having kids and getting married and how he wanted to take a step at a time. What really made me upset though is how Robin and Franky separated. I thought they were together in this stort? :( I would've been better if Robin went with Franky back to his home bc I see no reason for Robin going back to alabasta. But other than that I really loved it! ZoNami forever!

I loved this story, Zoro x Nami is my favorite anime couple

Continue the story pleaseeee

Omg! Somebody needs to kiss Chopper because he is TOO DAMN CUTE! w

Are we going to see a bit of Frobin, I wonder?

Hey there,
loved the story, the idea and pace of the development. Nami and Zoro stayed true to their character and reactions, but still feel this intensive love. I really enjoyed the first few chapters, retelling how everyone met and this feeling of a special bond between Nami and Zoro. Always feel other stories ignore that those two are the first two members and know each other the longest in a special way.
Loved that you gave Zoro the chance to say goodbye to Kunia. I know he probably didnt love her back then, but she is the girl/woman that has been such an essential part of himself for years. He needs to be free of this burden to give himself completely to Nami.
Thank you for this amazing story, enjoyed it so much!

i read this over and over again..
thank you for writing this beautiful story..
i hope u can make another zona story again, off course after u finish broken.. hehe
i will be waiting

Eeeee! Franky/Robin! /flail

So I can't resist saying that the whole Tarzan thing completely cracked me up. As did Nami's reaction to learning they could have had a while pillar of gold...And also Luffy asking if Hachi could fly. Very funny stuff.

So, um..thoughts. It's hard to pin down my thoughts about this chapter. You had a lot to cover and honesty? Arabasta was my least favorite arc; don't get me wrong, Vivi is a great character...but I personally find her annoying as FUCK.
Secondly, you are doing a very good job of presenting your ship. I don't intend to sail with it, (Nami/Paulie is my ultimate OTP, don't judge me!) but I definitely enjoy how you portray their relationship. Also, Zoro shouting that he respects her is really freaking adorable.

I'm so grateful you didn't go into Brook's past in it's entirety. Out of all of them, Brook's story makes me SOB, buckets of tears. And then the bit with the umbrellas happened and I was laughing again, so thank you.
Again, even though I'm not a Zoro/Nami fan, you've got great chemistry between them; Nami's teasing is always hilarious and fun to read.
And YES! Tiny bit of Frobin at the end there.

I loved Shirahoshi's admiration of Nami; I think it's very in character and was well done. There was a lot of Zoro/Nami (which isn't my preferred ship) but it was well written so it didn't bother me. I still think you're doing a great job of the recap.

I really enjoyed the crew interaction, and you managed to carry the story from person to person well. Even though it's a recap it's well done and I am enjoying it so far. I won't lie though, I am here for the promise of Frobin, lol.

The Ending XDDDDD

Okay, I didn't want to comment on each chapter because I wanted to finish this. I have. OMG, YASSSSSSSSSS. In this moment, I realized I am my mother. Where she wants me to get married and have babies, that's literally all I want for my ships.
That being said, I am not all caught up with OP, technically still in the Dressrosa arc, so this was a good for catching up. I really loved how you took moments that were canon and put your spin on it. It made it feel like the couples were real too. Which makes the best kind of fanfictions. The characters seems so real, though I would say I imagine Luffy with either Boa or no one (cause I pair Vivi with Khoza), and not even aware of sexual things like nosebleeds or bodies or attractions cause he's a pure little cinnamon bun too good for this world. But that bit about WANTING THEM TO GET MARRIED AND HAVE BABIES, oh my goodness-YES! I think I would have appreciated more FroBin, but ZoNa is MY SHIP, so this was divine. I really appreciate the hard work you put into this and I love that you made me love ZoNa again (I low-key feel ZoSan, jsut cause I don't find enough ZoNa stuff) and wow, good. Now to move onto another one...and now I'm be dreaming of babies...orange and green headed ones and half cyborg ones:P