He didn't realize Sirius was next to him? Haha! And ooh intense situation... I'd die there too.
-Marine

I liked the diary entry! But the bar scene was kinda confusing. Why did the hell's angels call Sirius James?

I hope whatever family issues you're having resolve themselves alright. Love the story! And I can already see some Reyna/Sirius problems being set up. Should be great :)

I can't wait to read more. I wonder who the two guys are? I'm looking forward to see what happens with Mark and Sirius. I hope your hand feels better and things with your family are ok!

Aww, I love great friends!
-Marine

I'm hooked:) pease post more!

What's Reyna's disorder?! And did Suriys get a new life when he "died", because that's been my guess. Interesting, can't wait for more! Time to go read your PJO fic!
-Marine

Great story so far. Can't wait for the next update!

I really like this story and I am looking forward to reading whatever happens next so please update soon.

Great chapter, even though it was a filler! I liked leading more about the quirky personalities!

Great story! Such a cool idea! Can't wait till the next update!

I like it :)

*dramatic gasp* The friend has found out! OMGODS, Sirius and Reyna would look sooooo cute together!
Keep up the awesomely awesome work!

-An excitedly waiting witch

A couple things first in Chapter two you said "The eve of the thirteenth fell on a Saturday" and she would have to work overtime. Then after she runs from the dinner and cries all night the next day is suddenly the 13th again. Either I read that wrong and it's still the same day or her working overtime on a saturday should have fallen on the 12th and not the 13th.

Personally I don't mind you writing in Brit English with the different spellings, if you're writing a Potter fic and it's set in the UK then Brit speak is preferred. Well I prefer it anyway.

Third it might be kinda ok to see one or two things from Sirius's PoV but generally if you're writing a first person centric fic it's always better IMO to stick too one character's PoV. It's like Okay she's telling this story about how she met Sirius and what happened between them and then suddenly we're seeing things from his PoV. How does she know what he's seeing and thinking? It just makes sense to me to leave it all one person.

You have me hooked. When Sirius said he had droped out of collage, did he mean auror training? Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! That cliffhanger was just cruel...
May the Valar guide your pen,
Nimrodel