Awesome!

Love seeing more fics about Batty. She is such an undeveloped character, and it's great to see what different authors do with her. Great work!

can I review my own story?

That's great! I love it.
btw it's sunnydaysgoldenrays. My login wasn't working on my iPod

I generally don't say this, but I wouldn't change a thing about it. It's really good!

Terrible

Amazing! I love when people write about Batty!