love it :)

only one word could describe what i just read: Perfect :)

I Love It!

This is really cute sweet and good ur a great writer! 4

Cute and perfect 3 Awesome job, keep writing!

I thought the ending wasn't too bad, though a little abrupt; almost as though it is going to be a multi-chapter story as opposed to a one shot. I would stay away from writing Author's Notes into the story as you did at the beginning because it really draws your reader out of the story. If something is unclear enough that you feel like you have to clarify it, then you should write it out entirely and put something else there instead. Aside from that and a few minor grammatical errors and a missing word here or there, this was really good. The story is sweet and relatively cannon if you don't think about it too much.

why is it that all the awesome original fics are one shots? not trying to complain like i'm still very glad this is here but just saying