I have a feeling that Jinx would be a bit more dominant then she is portrayed in this story but still similar to this. Also while Raven would no doubt be incredibly tough to fight, and maybe unbeatable if she didn’t hold back, Robin on the other hand wouldn’t beat Beast Boy. My reasoning being that Beast Boy’s biggest weakness is his immaturity and not fully trying to beat his opponent, but while he is certainly no martial arts master he is probably the second most skilled On the team since Robin trained him as well as the years of training from Mento. Combine that with his animal traits and shapeshifting abilities and I definitely think that he could beat Robin. While he is skilled and has an array of gadgets, he is only human. Plus Beast Boy’s greater years of experience and full prior knowledge of who Robin is might help give an advantage.

Beautiful story. I am personally a big BBRAE fan but BBJ is a close second and although I was sceptical at first, you made it flow really well. Even if I’m happy with BBJ I still say that RaeRob is an abomination and Raven should either be with BB or no one at all.

I think you hit it spot on. The fight was mostly realistic I do appreciate that you didn’t make Beastboy some demigod character out of nowhere lol. Also your characters were pretty accurate fir the way you portrayed them.

For characters like Red X and Jinx if you wanted to give them a name you could use their voice actors since they are the person that brings the character to life in a way.

Just a little info here, but animals don’t actually mark their “mate” if that’s what you want to call it. Also they don’t “mate” for life, other than that this is a great read so far :)

EXACTLYYYY! Omg thankyouu I’m happy another person understands, lol your officially a genius! Great story so far by the way! :)

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Great Story dude. Although, in reality they have done nothing wrong and could have called in JL, since they have authority over the Titans.

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Great Work! Now having finished reading all your works, I understand, appreciate, and respect your choice of writing style, character development, storyline, and I must give you credit for your work on tackling interesting topics. I alway had favored a Beast Boy and Jinx couple and I like the core ideas you touched on in this first story of yours. It was a joy to read!

this was a great story! Where's the sequel?

YOU STUPID SHIT ROBIN!

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