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Your writing is beautiful! So beautiful!

As for pairings, Id rather have Erza. :D

Hopefully, you'll update soon! 3

Whenever I would read stories like these, when Acnologia or Igneel leaves I don't feel sad cause I knew it would happen, but damn! You did so good at this but my heart broke reading that sentence!

Please UPDATE!

Is this story still active?

I must say this Fic is definitely interesting and for pairings I would prefer an Erza it would just take a lot longer to establish a relationship with Mira.

Do it NatsuXErza, there isn't to much Naza in here

You should do a natsu x erza

Well... I think that siegrain will someday stab Natsu in the back... And that someday Natsu will kick his a** because of it.

While Erza had her own issue with Jellal which we knew what it is.

And since your Natsu is a little bit wayward, i mean he spent his time to seek new enemy and stronger opponent, so basically all he knew is about fighting. Erza could be the one that would teach him about life and moral value all stuff, about friends family or even love. Which he did not learn from Acnologia

But my actual point is they would have the same goal that is to beat down Jellal while at it, they could learn more about each other and create a strong bond between each other

Cool story keep up :)

Update soon I love this story a lot. Personally I could see the paring working with Erza or Mirajane

Excellent chapter, really like the plot. Can't wait to see what will happen with Erza and jellal, but I have a suspicion that she's not Erza? Or is she? Also I really want to know how natsu will get involved with fairy tail.
Would really love to see natsu vs jellal/siegrain again. Also what does ultear need natsu for?
As always in my reviews, I will say, NaMi!
Hope you can update soon, XD

Awesome!i loved the chapter and which ever girls works for me. Just not Lucy. I love Natszh x Erza and Natsu x Mirajane. Also Natsu x Erza x Mirajane. ;) loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!

-ValinNight

A bit slow paced chapter in my opinion, but sometimes that is good, it was nice to see Natsu bit back at Ultear, she will probably distance herself from Natsu and keep a low profile. Please make it An Erza fic!

I'm going have to throw my vote in for NaMi, cause it is one of the lesser done pairings.

That was a nice chapter, I just hope that Erza being the one invited isn't a foreshadowing for her being a pairing in the future... sorry if I'm paranoid but there is too much 'NaZa' out there.
Anyway, yes, Jellal and Ultear are by no mean innocent but you'd think Natsu wouldn't be as innocent (or dense) as he is in canon seeing as he has been with Jellal/Siegrain for some time now.
Well, I don't think he should be playing Don Juan either but you'd think he'd at least know what she's hinting at.

'Till next time.
-DukeScarlet