Y'know, I was never really fond of Jelsa, but after binge reading this fic for two nights straight, I was exactly like Tooth in that final scene of chapter 31.

Damn, I'm at loss for words. Well, one things for sure; this story has been a major feels trip. You have a thing for yanking out heartstrings right when people think things are going well for Jack and Elsa. Almost each and every event that occurred here was a total shocker - hell, you /know/ what no one expected Elsa to give birth to twins, nor did anyone expect that Scarlet would technically be Jack's child after he 'gives it life,' in a sense. But I liked that. Speaking of which, do you know how hard I laughed when Jack forced Elsa's mother into labor by hitting her pregnant stomach with a snowball? I found that so hilarious at 2 am for some reason, oh wow. Would have never linked Elsa's ice powers with Jack if it wasn't for that. And oh, the way this story is told is impeccable; you switch back to the reality of Jack telling the story at the correct times, and Tooth's reactions to everything was hilarious! Although there were a few grammatical and spelling mistakes every here and there, that doesn't really take from the magnificence of this story, so don't worry about it~. I may have never read other Jelsa fics, but I can honestly say I'm glad you didn't make it about them trying to get the world to be able to see Jack or write in that Elsa becomes a Guardian. Your story is unique, tells a both gut-wrenching, yet heart-warming story about Jack and Elsa, and ends with the horrible truth of it all; Elsa wasn't going to live forever. But at least the Man in The Moon lets her visit Jack once a year, right?~ Overall, you wrote an amazing story that every Jelsa fanatic should read, for its realistic aspects in how life really was like back in the day, the cultural backgrounds, and the incredible feats they went through for each other.

10/10. I'd definitely recommend this fic to anyone who's up for an emotional roller coaster. Keep up the good work, and don't stop writing, okie?~

Beautiful story. I kinda wish she was like a free immortal you know like Jack was before he became a guardian, but this is a rather adorable ending. It's really nice for many to grant them one day to see each other. It kinda makes sense why he gives the guardians off on New Years. Anyway amazing story. Sincerely Madison aka GymnasticsRules101

Amg, seriously, I think its the first fanfic I laughed, I got mad, I cried so hard! I'm in love with this fanfic! You got an amazing talent! I hope to read more of your work ;D

Until 2016! :)

That's the most amazing ending ever!

I really liked how you ended that. And THANK YOU for not making her a Guardian. That gets on my nerves after a while. This is the second best Jelsa fanfic I have ever read, the frost being Infernal Ice by Arendelle Frost. If you haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it.
Okay, I admit, THIS IS BETTER THAN INFERNAL ICE! This is literally the BEST thing I have ever read. Thank you.

loved it! wonderful work! and aww! and jack be nice!

Fantastic! My favorite story was Jack and Bunny!

Aww he dreams of her every night!

A great way to start the new year!

Holy crap! Amazing story :D

Ha! I love you story! and I'm an anime nerd too! w

okay amazing work and i've seen the movie "the corpse bride" i loved it!

CRIES SELF TO SLEEP DIES little bit more inside

It surprised me when I saw this chapter posted, but I'm glad it was. I just want to tell you your original story seems interesting. My best friend's name is Amber! ;)

I love your work!

Too late I'm looking forward to any and all Jelsa fanfics coming from you. No pressure or anything, but seriously you are an amazing author!

That was the most gorgeous tear-jerker EVER. This was a fantastic story! I think it would be cool to make a little one-shot next year on new years. I think we'd all love it! I was sobbing in chapter 39, and it was 12:00 AM so I was trying to stay quiet. Now I'm sitting in a pool of tears. The butterfly thing reminded me of the movie Corpse Bride, you should check it out! If you end up ever updating again if you could tell me if you have any other fanfiction accounts (such as Wattpad or DeviantArt) and if you DO answer, my name's Lia. Thanks for writing such a great story!