aw, that was adorable! everyone was in character, and the ludwig bit in the end was brilliant. i am austria and austria is me here, i once even got lost inside my school lmao. but yeah, it was a really nice story! :D

awww ludwig at the end made the sugar even worse, i love it so so much aaah
this was super cute, good job, thank you so much for sharing!

I have Austria's sense of direction. *hugs him* I understand. I get lost on the way to the grocery store down the street from me. And to local places I've been to dozens of times.
This made me laugh through the whole thing!

I liked your story a lot! I like to read about how the 'settle couple' they are, it's very nice and tender speally when they are so 'vulnerable' to resolve theirs problems and they have to ask the help of Ludwig xdd.

Good fanfic!

This was hilarious - I think we all know some ditz who could manage to wander off and get lost like that. Your narrative style is really compelling. It could just be my mobile phone playing up, but this came up with no paragraphs and multiple characters speaking on the same line, which got a bit confusing. I think tweaking it so it's spaced out might attract more readers - it deserves them x