Reviews for A Hit to the head |
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![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorei sua história mesmo muito linda obrigada mesmo obrigada pela atenção mesmo obrigada eu vou ler todas |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amei sua história. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully paced and gave the accurate feeling of loosing the first version of your life and in that, finding a new life filled with those who care. I'd love a follow-up, tracking life 2.0 . |
![]() ![]() utterly beautiful thank you |
![]() ![]() I loved this story. I always felt Gibbs and Tony were more father and son, but were afraid to show their emotions. Also loved Astor the service dog. These animals are amazing with their intelligence and ability to help. Thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() I have tears dripping off my nose! Great chapter! Great story! |
![]() ![]() Okay last paragraph... Gibbs just broke my heart. Nicely done |
![]() ![]() Fantastic reaction to Astor not being in the room! Tony's definitely got some mad dog love for his baby girl 3 so sweet |
![]() ![]() Great chapter I think if the nurse tried to move Astor she'd find a big growling beast on her hands... Astor may even join Gibbs in growling lol I hope your little one is still doing well. My youngest son has seizures they can freak the living daylights out of you. |
![]() ![]() Astor! I love it! Poor Tony! Great dressing down that Brad gave the nurse. I love Brad and Tony friendship moments. Great job. |
![]() ![]() I love this story concept. You could use a Beta because you do have some simple words that you not using correctly such as where instead of wear. Also, in this chapter you have Tony walking up the stairs alone while Gibbs and Abby talk in the living room. That would never happen in their world, they are very protective. You went into great detail about what Tony cannot do and that was one of the rules so a GOOD Beta would catch that stuff. I do love a good father/son fic and this is hitting all those feels. Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see McGee included in this chapter. Hope to see more of him.:) |