| Reviews for Cut |
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   DaisyAnimeluvr chapter 4 . 10/6/2019 The arm thing is reeeeeeaaaalllly bothering me. Both arms are bandaged? BOTH have cuts on them? Pretty impressive work being able to get cuts on an automail arm to become infected. Being able to cut both his thighs makes sense— the automail on his left leg doesn’t start until just above his knee. But this sort of mistake in an FMA fic is a little too much. I know this work has been completed for 14 years, so I’m just beating a dead horse, but I would love to see this inconsistency rectified. |
| Betenowaru chapter 2 . 4/30/2019 Woow had to get kidnapped so easily |
| Guest chapter 30 . 6/23/2018 h e c c |
| Olivia chapter 5 . 6/18/2018 So far I’m diggin this fic. Bit continuity wise there’s a couple things. Mustang dated girls in the series and Edward could totally just alchemy his arm into a blade. He does it wall the time. |
| lucifer-in-my-head chapter 30 . 5/25/2017 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh this was so heart-wrenching I loved it. I love your work! |
| Good invader chapter 13 . 12/26/2016 High and dry when he was five rimes Lol |
| Pegasister60 chapter 30 . 10/9/2016 Nice ending! Plus future Ed coming in to save the day! Welp, time to scroll through your other stuff! |
| Pegasister60 chapter 28 . 10/9/2016 Okay, I haven't watched this in a long time, but Havoc is now my second favorite. I will always love Edward, always! |
| Pegasister60 chapter 25 . 10/9/2016 WHY ED WHY?! A perfectly good cheeseburger wasted! You could have at least done that with something else, or waited a bit to at least give the dish some respect! |
| Pegasister60 chapter 22 . 10/9/2016 I think the origin if that his mother said cutting makes her happy. He looked up to her, he trusted her, so why wouldn't it be imprinted in his mind to trust her words? |
| Pegasister60 chapter 13 . 10/9/2016 This chapter made me feel things... That's all I'm gonna say about this one. |
| Pegasister60 chapter 9 . 10/8/2016 I don't think their ever gonna find the razor unless Alphonse does some alchemy himself or they set up hidden cameras. |
| Pegasister60 chapter 7 . 10/8/2016 Here it comes... Also if there wasn't a razor, he could've broken a hand mirror somewhere or something. I know lots of things I probably shouldn't that come in handy when writing, especially with Danganronpa and murders. |
| Pegasister60 chapter 4 . 10/8/2016 I like Clay a lot, he got answers from someone who would explode if he heard the any fo the following words: Short Freak Kid etc. Also I like the idea of them being his legal guardians. One's like a father-figure and the other is the one who deals with the paperwork. (When it comes to Ed, there will always be paperwork.) |
| Pegasister60 chapter 3 . 10/8/2016 I see what you mean now about the arms thing, but you could just leave it there if no one really points it out. |
