please continue the next chapter

Aww- this story is adorable Moonwalking-Greaser! It's fun to see Pony actually be a big brother for once. And Nicky is perfectly full of personality and mischief, perfectly six going on seven! I definitely see why Pony's tired of getting stuck babysitting, though not picking him up after school and letting him walk home alone was pretty shameful. But it sounds like Pony's at the end of his rope and running away seems to be both of these brothers' method of choice.
I enjoyed this :)

I am so glad you finally updated . You know,I liked very much this story when you published first . I can't think it was already four years ago . I was very anxious to know the sequel,but with the times I thought it will never happen . And I published my owns The Outsiders stories .
And you did it ! It's great ! I love little Nicky . I hope you'll continue this story like that . One-shot would be great,I sure . But please,continue this story too .

No, no this is good. Do the one-shot thing, its a good idea. And update, too, that's always a good thing.

"Even me and my sister don't fight as much as y'all do."
Me and my brother fight practically twice a day with screaming. Mostly my fault, though.

Please continue this story! I think if you'd still be up to it then you could make one-shots after the story is over imo.

You know this really is an adventure

That's okay. Take your time.

I have to know what happens between ponyboy and Nicky. Will I ever know?!

Oh no! Poor little guy. Are you still going to continue?

The little kid's cute! Are you going to continue?

You can't really write Outsiders stories without some swear words. I mean I don't cuss in reality but when it comes to writing, well you can't portray these boys right without them, otherwise it'd be too out of character. Their hoods they're suppose to have dirty mouths. Don't feel bad about it, you're just trying to write your story.

Anyway, I"m intrigued with this whole Pony, Nicholas thing. I'm not to fond of another sibling fics. Not exactly my cup of tea but it's cute. If I were Pony I'd be frustrated too. Yeah alcohol hurts like heck but I always sat still when I got it put on, and I just happened to be the clumsiest person in the world, so I know how much it stings, but I definitely would never bite the person putting it on me. It seems a little harsh to me. I'd just cry an scream from pain. I don't know though, I was kind of a tough kid too, I had two older sisters, and they're still not nice. It sucks being the youngest... :(

AW...siblings...
This reminds me of how much I love my baby brother. The little Irritant. :)

I love this story I think it's so in character and the pace is great! Please please please update when you can

Yeah ! I hope that you will update soon ! I can't to wait more for the sequel ! Oh,god ! You made me so curious ! I need to know why Pony said it ! I hope that we won't say that Nicky isn't really his little brother ! At last,if you said it,it's great all the same . I like little Nicky,he is so cute . So real ! Please,update soon ! I can't to wait more . I like too how are Johnny and Two Bits with the little boy ! I like this type of story with little brother or little sister . Very very GREAT ! :)