Hey, if you joined the kill la kill fandom, you are already awesome, but if you write a fanfic about one of the BEST kill la kill ships, the you are GOD level awesome and your fanfic does not suck, it is AWESOME AT LIFE.

(crying like Mr. Mankanshoku after he tasted One-Star cooking) Your work has inspired me to write my own Kill La Kill fanfic in which, after a drunken mistake, Jakuzure has to take Mako, Ryuko, Satsuki, and the other Elite Four members to Tokyo Disney, much to her dismay and the amusement of Ryuko, Inumuta, and Sanageyama.

Also, great fic!

Pls learn how to spell words in japanese

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSssss

Continue or not?

KAWAII

Ryuuko is more than capable of taking down one star students even without senketsu showed on the first episode

Was that sanegayama or aikuro, cause sanegayama is the type who would need to get hit in the head with a kendo stick labeled love. also of the elite four the only one old enough to get a driver's license is gamagori, they actually made a point about that in the anime.

CUTE! And I can totally see Gamagori doing that:)

Cute story, but a little fast paced.
Personally I felt the only thing your story needed was the hothead personality on both characters, but overall it was good, I liked it a lot -w-

That was adorable.

I gotta say. its a damn pity there won't be anymore added to this. I loved it and would have liked to have seen this go further.

Hmm...I like this story but I kinda feel it's a bit too fast paced. Also, some parts of the story don't have a break so it looks a bit weird. For example:
RyukoxSanageyama : Maybe

-Break-

Why is always this hot ? Ryuko Matoi thought to herself as she was walking to Honnouji Academy with her best friend, Mako biting away Ryuko's ear always talking about unnecessary things. Ryuko enjoyed the company though secretly. She didn't ever get to spend time with her own family. Mako's family now felt like her family.

There should be a break there. Also, you have some spelling errors but none that aren't too bad and some sentences don't have quotation marks.
I hope this helps.
-Venna

I would say that Ryuko's character would act more cool and sure of herself on the outside, but she has melancholy thoughts. Sanageyama would similar to Ryuko but a smidge more hotblooded. I think Ryuko's dialogue should sound more informal and delinquent like but really sweet when she's comfortable.

But still, great story.