Pleeeeeeeaaaase update soon! I love this story!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

such a shame you didnt continue this story, it is a very good read and i got no critic on the story so far, while i did like to see another few chapters to this or even a conclusion to the story your typing..i do tend to be realistic on dropped stories, as such i would like to recommend you to continue typing to your fantasies and not be swayed by negative reviews or no comments at all, as the saying goes: no bad reviews is a good review.

So this story has been a lot of fun, once you got a feel for the transition. Kamiko (seriously, a great name, but WAY on the nose) is a bit OP for entry level arc, but right about where should should be post-timeskip — having a tailed beast as a mother just means development happened earlier.

I'd like to maybe see some more character moments, fun with Anko, worried with Kurama, but overall, the balance is good, and no one will be completely satisfied with their own personal tastes.

Thanks for sharing!

wow so good

I think being not strong enough is a major weakness in anyone's book. You only make Sasuke sound dumb...

Great update. I’m excited to see what happens next in the story so keep up the great work. Hopefully writers block doesn’t strike you because your writing is phenomenal. The scene with Kamiko and Kurama was heartbreaking and uplifting at the same time. Great contrast of two emotions at the same time, what with the sadness and regret that Kamiko was showing followed by the elation that she felt after she was forgiven. It was written so well. Best of luck in all your writing endeavors

great chap

This chapter just cemented how trashy it will get. Changing hair color to fem kurama... have that displayed in the info about the story next time, not everybody like those things.

And despite say she'll drop the act write down OOC naruto. Would save people the trouble of reading.

Wait I'm confused. Is Kamiko a lesbian or in love with a girl? Or is she into sasuke?

oh, how I love the basic wall breaking. I love guilty crown it is one of my favorite animes. And I agree it is a beautiful song

And that could be the best moment for Kamiko to call him a 'Pervert' or 'Spy' and run away. I mean, a old man that declare himself a super pervert that know your name... Yeah

great chapter. but just to point out, shikamarus mom's name is Yoshino. you had it right the first time but you changed it. just a heads up!

Great way to update the story. Hoping to see a new chapter soon so keep up the great work and best of luck in all your writing endeavors