Reviews for Hidden Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I have wanted to read something just like this for a long time! The characters are very realistic, your writing technique is excellent, and the plot is nicely pased, if a bit fast, but it just heightens the intensity. Please continue with this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The suspense is killing me! Great chapter though! |
![]() ![]() hope you're still going. |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter. it would be hilairious if it was the government. "sir you were flying without a permit, we're sending you to juvie." On a serious note, makes more sense to be a criminal anti-mutant group seeing as being a mutant doesn't seem to be illegal in this fic, just a hot button issue Unless the govm'nt was trying to recruit him for something. |
![]() ![]() yay! I believe I can Fly! |
![]() ![]() love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Good progression. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter please update soon?! |
![]() ![]() cool! as to what to do next, eh, seeing him at school was interesting. |
![]() ![]() cool stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this might be my favorite ongoing fic. Avery keep on trucking you'll get through to them! |
![]() ![]() oh no! I hope somebody rescues him! teacher? Vanessa? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the fact that you made Vanessa so easy going. please update soon? |
![]() ![]() a friend recommended this to me. Good stuff! |
![]() ![]() so we get to the school. Looking forward to the new characters |