The only unrealistic part of the story is the pairing.. It would been better if they Bonded Like Siblings and She Reminds Kirito of his Sister who he could of treated Better.

Kirito and Dillca should have a Sobling bond.

While kirito pairs with Sinon. With her being sort of a Mentor and Guide to Kirito

Amazing story! It's been a while since I've read such a story that made me rush to the next chapter to see what will happen next. Thank you for writing such a unique story for Kirito/Silica. The pairing doesn't get nearly enough attention like the others and this is a very interest plot line for them. I like your way of portraying the characters personalities, it's different, which I like. Even though, I know you haven't updated in years, I will continue to have hope you may surprise your readers and I with another chapter someday. However, if that doesn't happen, I hope you do well IRL and continue writing in general. Thank you for the story. Hope to see the next chapter or even an ending chapter (if you can't continue on the story) because I certainly can't wait to see what happens next.

Good job on the first chapter

Aww. That was sweet.

This is a really interesting story, so I'm a bit sad it isn't getting any updates. It's an amazing concept that has been handled really well, and while Silica isn't my favorite girl from SAO...I can't deny that her naivety is a requirement for this fic to work.

I have to say, I really love how you handled Kirito's character. He's changed in the ways you'd imagine he would, but he's still the kind boy who just wants to help people. It's really interesting to see the kindest and most selfless character in the series bearing the stigma of a Red player, and kinda ironic to the way everyone in SAO is trying to arrest (possibly kill) the only person who can actually clear the game.

I also enjoy the effect Silica has on the whole thing. She's obviously fucked up Kirito's entire setup in Aincrad, but I can almost bet this is the happiest he's felt in more than a year. Plus, I think she's the only person stuck in SAO (aside from maybe Asuna, or some of the gameverse characters) who would accept Kirito the way he is now. Of course, Leafa would never accept that her 'dear onii-chan' is a heartless killer and Sinon would be sympathetic and probably understand the situation even better than Silica...but they're not stuck in Aincrad, so it doesn't matter.

Anyway, this was a really interesting story. Hope you continue it someday.

Hope for an update. Keep up the good work.

I'm questioning some Math . But really great story

Combat maniac Kirito would certainly think that music is ridiculous..
It would be interesting to see interaction between Pina and Kirito.

I'm guessing after 2 years an update is unlikely, but I like this story for the way Kirito and Silica act towards each other. I know the plan was to pair them and I don't see and issue with that, but I've gotta say I really like this interaction that they've got where there aren't fully fledged feelings, its more the need to have the other around cropping up from time to time gives it a really nice dynamic. I think its something that isn't really built upon in most fics, they either go all out love for each other or no romantic attraction at all. Its nice to have a change of pace and have the need to be close with a romantic edge instead of all out love.

please please update soon

Impressive writing!

Great story it is interesting to see Kirito as a Red Player in this scenario. Also I always did like Silica.
I wish you luck in future chapters and hope to see an update soon :-D
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I'm kind of sad this didn't really get updated in a while. It seemed like it could go somewhere great.

This is really cute, I hope it continues! You've done a great job of giving Kirito and Silica a realistic relationship blossoming together, and I'm really curious to see where this will go. Looking forward to more.