dont know why but i was reading this fic with genesis reading loveless in the background, kinda went well with the fic

Great story and I appreciate the plot twists, do not appreciate the immense difficulty of identifying the POV as well as the messiness of the format. If I'm being honest, I frequently have no idea what's going on, as the settings change rapidly, and at times there's no real clarification to who is thinking of what.

But take everything else I said, minus the praises, with a grain of salt for I am slow and need things explained to me at face value in order to understand certain characters' actions or thoughts.

One question daquck

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

Thanks for the update, it’s been a while 3
I enjoyed the Dark Souls reference, I assume you were simply playing that game a lot at the time and wanted to throw it in there hah.

Overall very pleased with how you’ve implemented the Bleach crossover, it’s invredibly unique. I haven’t really read anything like it before (well, since the first time I read this story... I had to re-read it thanks to your update!). So I am a bit cautious and afraid when you state that you will male use of gigai. [Trigger warning: personal opinion] I think that would take away from the mystique of the ’spirit’-thing they currently have goong for them.

Amazing cliffhanger. Itachi (Gin) killing Naruto (Aizen) and them blth betraying Konoha (Soul Society) - you put it together very well.

Finally I want that quality takes time. In all these chapters I’ve only found a single error of any kind, be it spelling, punctuation or grammar. So not only do you have the basics but you actually weave a damn good story.

See you in 2020 for the next update, yeah? :)

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I love it great story

This is confusing but i LIKE it

Naruto died at the hands of itachi, or will it be an illusion? poor shikamaru wrongly chose his victim, trying to kill itachi, have died, or will have plans for him?, I look forward to the next chapter.

now who will be the new hokage, will be danzo ?, and who will be the next victim of shikamaru, I look forward to the next chapter

Haha! Illusions, I bet! More! More!

Fucking writer's block... Haven't been able to do shit for two years with it... well, that's actually due to laziness and a series of unfortunate accidents, but god damn it, writer's block! Also, keep on going with this story, I love it.

Don't worry we original readers are still here, I won't deny that you've taken your sweet time though...

Didn't both series end on poor notes?

I don't understand anything in this Damm confusing fic.