Wow, Quirvine! I am so excited to read

I have read this story years ago. I must say, it is one of the best piece of fan works that has been submitted to Very good job.

let me just say i am very chuffed to have found this story. i bookmarked chapter 10 on about 2 years ago, looked it up today and it only went to chapter 11... with no author name. but i had to read summore! so here i am, eventually.

my leet search skills rock, and so does this story. :)

HAHA! Internet Explorer tried to bitchslap me again by closing the browser window randomly and making me re-type my whole review, but I beat it and copied my review! TAKE THAT, YOU APPLICATION FROM HELL! KYAHAHAHA!
So, here's the review:
So long. But it's reallyreally good! I love the pairing and characterization and the whole basis for the story. Poor Irvine and Quistis. Damn that amnesia! But there's more, that I know, a trilogy, correct? I'm trying to remember, but all I can come up with is thiocyanate, SCN. Damn nomenclature. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the rest of the series, just have to get around to reading it, though I'm sure that's it's going to be amazing, just like this portion. I think this shall be an epic. Huzzah!

Overall: great story, great plot, very nicely done, I really enjoyed reading it.

BUT! I gotta say, I'm really lost :p. I read this thing in like three days (yes, the whole thing ... I can be pretty damn obsessive when I want to) so I think I only understand half of it, since it's really complicated. Still ... it was teh cool, and I enjoyed it. The summary helped loads, too. :p

Now I'm off to read Antithesis. Yep, I am a sucker for punishment. Hey, at least I'm enjoying myself. lol ...

my good gracious, girl.

no, i hadn't ever read this before - and i'm not sure why. i just swallowed all thirty-three chapters over the course of this pleasant evening (not like i had anything else to do, other than cleaning my apartment ... bah).

all i can say is: wow.

i don't believe the details you've got planned out - all the introspectives you've given these characters - the past and the present and all the fantasy and the intricately woven histories. your new characters fit in with the old ones, your new ideas and magics fitting in with everything else ... you've planned this out so well i'm almost scared.

and above all, you write one complex, sexy story, sister. i can't wait to see where the hell this is going - i have no idea - and i like that a whole lot.

Ah, well...Long-time-no-see. I read the entire story over again, which almost seemed better than the first time because I actually understood what was happening. BE, I wish I could write like you. I'm going to start reading all of the other parts next time I get a chance. Sorry for not reviewing in so long...*Sheepish grin* Anyways, great story. No doubt I'll end up reading it again someday.

Your story was great! I'm so happy that someone finally put Irvy and me together! It was very well written and some words were too advanced for me, but it was exciting and held on to my attention!

What is this smut! I'm outraged! Never in my life-

Oh who'm I kidding? I'm still grinning like a fool. I can barely type! XD I guess... all I have to say is.. whoah. Lol. I was giggling like a school girl doped up on nitrous oxide. Waka waka quirk quirk. Keep up the good work. I'd read chapter 26a right now, but IS BEING NOT NICE AGAIN! "category has been closed, check main page for any and all announcements" it says. How come I can get to the FFVI fanfic page? HUH? How come I can read chapter 1 and 25 on this thing! . Yeah, I'm only a little peeved. Anyway. HURRAY TO YOU!

Hello Briar. First of all I want to comment on how great this fic is, I think that after all the usual pairing fics it's plain lovely to see something different. Of course, the plot is great too.

Secondly, I'm wondering if you've been getting my mails. I've written you back about your submission to RPGClassics but I haven't gotten any reply so I was starting to wonder.

Best wishes

Weiila

awesome story it's like lord of the rings or something but with sex. thanks for the story.

thanks for last night too ;)

okay.

I get it now!

holy fuck do I get it.

wow.

your a genius. i can't believe you wrote this(well i can belive that YOU wrote it).

I will read Eden Unbound now. :)

wow.

that's intense. I wonder what it's saying exactly.

it's a riddle, right?

sheesh- you're just too brillant, brareve.

thanks for the

amazing story.

I love your poetry!

it's amazing.

this chapter was really cryptic

and eerie. I hope you explain it

because i really am not smart enough to get all of it.

it makes me want to read Eden unbound!

that was so beautiful.

pure kinneas.

I've fallen in love with your hero and find myself

always relating to the heroine.

this was a wonderful retelling of the game.