Wonderful story. I couldn't stop reading.

This is one of those stories I keep coming back to, even if I don't visit the fandom anymore. It always soothes me, especially the ending. I would've loved a sequel, but I'm happy with what you left us.

This is one of my favorites that I keep rereading when I'm having a bad day. Please "think" harder about that sequel. I would love to read more from you!

i have read it several times now and i still love it. i hope one day you come back and write some more...

Wow! I really loved this. :) I hope you did decide to write a sequel and will check your page to see if you did.

Alejandro was right. Diego needed more people who love him as Diego to know his secret so he isn't so alone.

I love this story. At times I thought it unrealistic for Diego to push himself this hard, though. I thought once he had been captured it really flowed much better. I really like this chapter with the talk between Alejandro and Felipe. Very well-written and paced. Excellent job! Thanks again for sharing this story!

very nice

This story has been interesting. It's nice.

What a lovely story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your take on Diego and Alejandro's relationship was awesome. Thank you for sharing!

you did an excellent job, Probeda! This story is really great. Your characters are almost real, I could feel their emotions, understand their reasoning, watch reality with their eyes. It was brilliant idea to present the plot from Felipe's point of view, too. This way the burden of responsibility you wanted to describe could be shown fully and without redundant pathos.

It's one of the best stories of this kind I've read.

(sorry for my english, I am not an english-native speaker)

I just want to tell you I really enjoyed reading your story. I read it with no break, the whole thing at once that's how good it was. Thank you very much for writing it! You sure have a talent to keep the reader submearged completely in the story, interesting plot, little twists but maily keeping the characters real and true to what we've seen on FAm Zorro. I really enjoyed what you did with Diego and his feelings and flustration. There were few things a bit repeated ( bandits) a bit too many injuries for Diego and few things a bit unrealistic but hey it's a Zorro you wrote about. I really loved your story, please keep writing I'd love to read some more!

You are an amazing writer. This story, plot, character development, your use of words, it's just perfect.

The only thing I can say in criticism is that it is a damn

shame you have written very few stories. With this talent you should write 10 more Zorro stories...That would make me very happy lol

I must have missed something, or perhaps this is just a mistake?

"Ah, here you are Felipe," Diego said. He turned and nodded at Victoria. "I am afraid, **Senora**, that I do not have the time to visit today, no matter how tempting the company."

Diego referred to Victoria as a SENORA. Is he just tired, or what?

Oh good you are exploring Alejandro’s character, and I’m curious what role Hinojosa will play in this story.

Another great chapter. I’m curious to see what happens with Felipe and Olivia.