Hey! First off, I'm really sorry for the extreme amount of time it has been between the update and my review. I have been super busy, though, and there were stretches of time where I didn't have internet access. But, I'm sure you don't want to hear about that.

This chapter was kind of short, but it was still really good. I like that you included some background information about Fidget's clan, since I have always wondered what happened to the characters before the start of the game.

Like with the last chapter, you did a good job at making Fidget sound like Fidget. I could really picture her writing this.

Overall, I really love this chapter- and this story- and I hope you update soon, because I really want to see how Fidget reacts to meeting Dust.

Nice to see this continued. Fidget was always such a nice character. Seeing how Fidget saw the world would be interesting. This has been the Anonymous Guest, and I'll see you next time.

Hi! This story is actually really good so far. I think you've done a good job of capturing Fidget's voice and personality. Please update soon, because there aren't enough good stories for this archive.