Reviews for Cause and Effect
Guest chapter 16 . 11/4/2019
So as a general rule I don’t read and happy fanfiction. I deal badly with sad stories and don’t like being upset. Somehow though I knew this would be different, it was sad and made me cry but it was brilliant. Very well written and captures emotion beautifully. It was an amazing story.
1983Sarah chapter 16 . 8/15/2014
So glad that Stiles was able to talk with the pack and they are finding a way to deal with all the hurt and sadness they are feeling. Thank goodness Derek was able to reach out to John too!
Lunabell Marauder Knyte chapter 16 . 8/14/2014
As a writer I understand the need to some days write out these very emotional, negative feelings. And bravo on that. As a read though, I was wondering if you've considered writing an alternate version where Derek decides to check in on Stiles regardless of the call and save him?
Guest chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
I'm not an emotional person AT ALL but this story had me in waterworks so good job I guess? I think they shouldn't listen to Stiles and each have a tribute of him in their business or kids name. At least Scott oh and closure for Papa Stilinski
Totes McGotes chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
That was a really deep chapter. It completely made sense and the way you wrote this chapter was outstanding. I'm sad to see the story ending, but it's been a really great read. I hope you're feeling better as well!
1983Sarah chapter 14 . 7/29/2014
So sad for them all, Allison and Isaac trying to find a way to keep going. I hope Scott's pack meeting helps everyone!
Leaning Leon chapter 8 . 7/27/2014
Mates as in British/Aussie slang for good friends? Or mates as in partners.
Totes McGotes chapter 12 . 7/2/2014
I won't lie, I kind of hope Stiles is brought back to life somehow, but I doubt that will happen. I am wondering why Lydia felt disconnected with Stiles when he hugged her. And what are they gonna do about Derek? I can't wait for the next update!
1983Sarah chapter 12 . 6/18/2014
Oh wow, at first I was glad Stiles reached out but now I'm a bit worried as to if this ghost thing is really Stiles since Lydia isn't sure that it felt like Stiles. I hope we all find out soon!
1983Sarah chapter 11 . 6/2/2014
Good update. Lydia has me wondering what she's going to tell them all. I'm glad that Scott is taking the initiative and calling a pack meeting, they all seem to really need it.
Totes McGotes chapter 11 . 5/30/2014
:C :C :C is all I have to say. Please update soon!
Anon123 chapter 11 . 5/26/2014
Great story! Had me crying though...but still Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Scavenger'sDaughter2 chapter 11 . 5/25/2014
As always good job. Super sad. I love it
Totes McGotes chapter 10 . 5/22/2014
It really shows that Stiles was Derek's mate, since he was hurting and drinking himself into oblivion. I'm glad Scott found him and got him to open up. I'll be waiting for the pack meeting chapter! Please update soon!
1983Sarah chapter 10 . 5/22/2014
OMG, Derek, don't hurt yourself! That is soooo sad. I hope that Scott can help him and together then can work through this pain.
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