sorry to be rude but caleb wasn't IN the story he was MENTIONED in the story and calebs last name is rivers

it is pensylivania not virginia

If you want more reviews you should probably post a new story for each one, instead of a new chapter. You can just post one-shots if you don't want to continue stories. Posting it like this might drive readers away because they don't know what they'll be reading about. Happy writing!

So is each chapter a new fic? If they are, that's not allowed here. If they're chapters to the same fic, change your summary.