Reviews for Recovery One (SYOC)
Permanently Inactive chapter 5 . 5/4/2014
Cool chapter keep up the good work. Hope you can use my OC.
Your fan,
sonofthetrigod
Permanently Inactive chapter 4 . 5/4/2014
Cool chapter and poor Eva.
Your fan,
sonofthetrigod
Permanently Inactive chapter 3 . 5/4/2014
Cool chapter! I really don't have much clue about these two. Keep up the good work.
Your fan,
sonofthetrigod
Permanently Inactive chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
Cool chapter and if there was a proper OC format I apologize. If you like my OC but want me to use your format PM it to me and I'll edit my form to match it.
Your new fan,
sonofthetrigod
Permanently Inactive chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Cool chapter but why do they have a problem with Percy. Hope you like my OC.
Your fan,
sonofthetrigod
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Name: Felicity Aura
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Parent: Tyche, goddess of luck, chance and fortune
Appearance: Long, straight, glossy pale blonde hair with hints of honey and wide, teal eyes fringed by long, thick, mascara-ed lashes. She's tall, slim, lean, lithe, toned, tan and curvy with long legs, high cheekbones, a ski slope nose and full, pink lips.
Personality: Gentle, lazy, competitive, funny, kind, sweet, quiet, even tempered, quick on her feet, easy going, mischievous, and random
Backstory/Family: Her dad is Stephen Aura, powerful and sought after lawyer. She lived with him in NYC, NY until a hellhound came after her when she was ten. She escaped with her dad who whisked her off to Camp Half-Blood where she tried to visit him several times a year.
Skills/Weapons: She carries a Xiphos sword named γρήγορη λεπίδα or grí̱gori̱ lepída meaning 'quick blade'. The sword turns into an charm on an anklet in its dormant form.
Special Abilities: Being a child of Tyche, Felicity is able to manipulate luck, and usually will be able to come ahead.
Likes: games of chance, carnivals, winning, sword fighting, NYC, New York, New York University, Camp, strawberry banana smoothies, betting, laughing, the colour silver and well cooked steak.
Dislikes: losing, weird things in her smoothies, getting pranked, tough meat, death, war, swimming, creepers, monsters and distrustful people.
100 duck sized horses. She'd kill the leader with her sword, and take over the others horses by tricking them into charging at once where she'll dodge and they'll collide together.
Lioness Deity chapter 5 . 3/31/2014
CRAP, I totally forgot that I already sent on out. Just take the more recent one as an updat eon the character. Plz?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Name: Paki Jacobowitz
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Parent: Eris
Appearence: Black hair, green eyes, dark skin are the basics. Her clothes consist of a red shirt with black sleeves and a record on it. Her pants are black and she alsi wears red shoes. She wears golden lipstick as well. Frick if I didn't fill in the weapons thing, she fights with an Imperial gold chainsaw. With the help of Leo, she get it to chain between a chainsaw and lipstick, like Kanaya's chainsaw since she's a fangirl of Homestuck.
Personality: Paki is caring person. When she first met the gang, it took her a while to get used to friends. She gained trust in them and swore by the River Styx to remain loyal to them no matter what. She, though when depressed, doesn't talk to them and talks to her doll instead.
Backstory: Paki hid most of her life. Her step-mom beat her, often. When she found out about Homestuck, she became an addict to it and when her parents weren't home, she put together a little John Egbert doll and spoke to it when she didn't have anyone. She continues speak to it, sleep with it and keep it close to her. Her parents gave her freedom at age 16 and she used it to get a few jobs and an appartment. Her job was as a waitress at a diner. She was achased into CHB by a Hellhound.
Family: Her step-mom drank alot and beat her. Her dad was out at work so much, Paki sometimes wouldn't be able to recognize him.
Skills: Fighting.
Special Abilities: Acting.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Name/Gender/Age:Vladimir Drac hellsing /male/18

Parent:Tartarus (don't ask), grandson of ares, great grandson of Phobos

Appearance:tall ,muscular, blood red eyes, space black hair,Caucasian

Personality:he is usually mean and a loner to others but gets a little nice when you get to know him but he is over all a blood thirsty,battle hungery person

Backstory/Family:Jessica hellsing/ born to a daughter of ares in the streets of britan vlad was trained by his mother to be a killing machine and to one day protect Olympus from danger so when he turned 18 he went to America for camp half blood only to get reject from others from his father due to him being claimed by Tartarus when he steped foot on camp this did not stop him from his goal though it only stregthen it .

Skills/Weapons: a pitch black sword that literally make you experience torturs from Tartarus 10x than the real deal and a suit of armor made from metallic Styx and imperial gold painted black and red h

Special Abilities:

Likes/Dislikes:
XxSoldierOfGodxX chapter 5 . 3/30/2014
Nice chap!
Lioness Deity chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
May I submit one? Thx.
Name: Paki Jacobowitz
Gender: female
Age: can you take 26? If not, 18.
Parents: Melissa (dead Mom (died in car crash but Paki doesn't know) Rusty (Dad. Died of lung and liver cancer after drinking too much one night)
appearence: Black hair, dark blue eyes, tan skin. Wears a black shirt with the SBURB logo on it with a green trench coat over it. Blue jeans, too. She also wears black combat boots with it, too.
Personality: Paki is often depressed. She smokes occassionally. She reads homestuck an awful lot to calm her down. She fights with a chainsaw covered with celestial bronz with a bit of help from Leo.
Family: see Parents
Backstory: Paki was ignored by her father alot. Her mom was not around often so she had to gain responsibility quickly. Her dad made her do all the work when he heard this. She grew up in an apartment where she continues to work. Her dad died of liver and lung cancer when she was 16. She work as the appartments until she was chased out by a hellhound.
Skills: fighting
Special abilities: none
Likes: video games, adventure, movies, Homestuck, reading
hates: sci-fi, tight clothes, revealing clothes,
Guzigirl123 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
Name/gender/age: Addie York, girl, 15
Parent: Iris
Appearance: RAINBOW...EVERYTHING!
Personality: Giddy, fun, pretty, stylish, funny
Backstory/family: Family: Roger York, her dad, Iris. Backstory: She loved her life, and was perfectly happy with it, but a harpy attacked her, and her mom gave her a plane ticket to New York.
Skills/Weapons: She can blind people with rainbows, make instant Iris Messages, has a spear called Violet, and a dagger called Crimson.
Special abilities: See above
Likes/dislikes: Likes: colors, light, animals. Dislikes: gray and black, darkness, her ADHD, and dyslexia
Choose: Depends if she is fighting alone. Alone: horse sized ducks. Together with someone: duck sized horses.
Anything I want to add: nope
XxSoldierOfGodxX chapter 4 . 3/26/2014
Dakota's parent is Zeus while I think Eva's parent is Thantos or Hades.
Sparkle9510 chapter 2 . 3/23/2014
Name: Jade Cross
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Parent: If I could be daughter of a big three, it would be Hades. If not, I'll be a daughter of hmm...Apollo
Personality: Cold to people, but if you get to know her, she's a loyal friend who do anything. Mature and unnaturally calm.
Backstory/Family: (I'll let you make up the names for the family members, but if you don't want to, PM me.) Lives in Manhattan. Both parents are alive, but doesn't talk to her. Has a twin brothers that takes advantage of her. In the end she runs away and surprisingly makes her way to Camp Half-Blood with the help of a sayter that found her.
Skills/Weapons: Good with a bow. She has a bow (Striker) and a sword (Icestreak)
Special Abilities: does drawing counts? i can't come up with any... :(
Likes: singing, drawing, training, her friends,
Dislike: people who get in her way, bugs, going back to her family
10 horse sized ducks: come up with a plan to trap them, but not kill them. If Jade can't, then she uses her instincts and skills to kill them
Anything you want to add: If you want to alter this character a bit, I don't mind. I submitted an oc character to a fanfiction, but the writer removed my review... meh anyway, please accepted my original character! :)
PuddingNinja chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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