Incredibly visceral trama that Jou goes through here. They both need help. And I feel awful thinking that, ultimately, they are good for each other even knowing that in RL, Seto should be locked under the jail. Ah, the perfect knowledge of fiction; I have no doubt that, eventually, they will work out all misunderstandings and forgive all wrongs.

That was exciting! Very detailed and enjoyable, thank you for sharing!

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I liked this story, but it would have been much better if you had Kaiba show up before they raped Jou. That is the reason I give this story a 4 out of 10 instead of a full on 10 out of 10. It ruined it for me.

I'm laughing so hard right now! The idea of Kaiba being Joey's sugar daddy is adorable! Loved it!

Holy cow, this fic was... guh... hot damn!
Epic of epic epicness

The story and plot is well-thought out and you have a great writing style.
I think I have to agree wth Kay though - rape isn't something that's humorous and romantic. Although the dialogue between the two may be humorous, there are points where it isn't. I would at least put it under the Angst category not to confuse people. I guess keeping it as Romance is ok but it's something that isn't as prominent until near the end.

Also a rape warning or sexual assault warning might be a good idea to put in the summary. I'm not a stickler for trigger warnings but I think in this case it might be for the better.

Other than that, I enjoyed reading this story - keep writing

hehe i guess that explains why the story was so long, i didn't realize it was a one-shot initially!

I enjoyed reading this story A LOT-the smut,the emotional turmoil and everything.I really feel like Kaiba's charactization follows his manga personality very closely what with his possessiveness and domination get 's sad to see there won't be a sequel but I'm happy to know that Kaiba and Jounochi ended up together.

*nosebleed* I love reading blowjobs and you writing them so many times made my day! _ Thanks for your hardwork, I mean Trying to write this multi-sex one shot fanfic must be hard :D

Poster story for Stockholm syndrome. I'm sorry..but the whole time i was reading this i was thinking ' i know you're gonna forgive him but you shouldn't.' because he shouldn't have. he was blackmailed into it and then at one point punished by rape. it shouldn't matter that kaiba suddenly decided to care. he shouldn't have been forgiven. that being said, because logic screamed at me to say it, the writing is great and i enjoyed it on a technical standpoint. you as an author are very good.

Well done good story. Thanks for writing it

I'm sorry I really don't mean to knock your writing. But I strongly recommend you change the genres on this story.
Rape is not humour or romance, and I recommend you put a warning in here as well.
And I don't know if you meant it but some of the lines, like don't make me hurt you...sound like things you would hear in an abusive relationship.
There all kind of dark things that belong in an angst category.

I did like the summary and liked the first half, but it took a turn that I couldn't read passed, and if I had know it had rape in I wouldn't have read it.
So please put a warning in and change the genres.

Wonderful story, and very well written :) I think the story is just fine as is, despite the insistence on a sequel. Hot and realistically emotional; brilliant. Well done :)

I don't get why there are not more reviews, but oh well. I really enjoyed this one! I don't think its a kink or anything, but I'm a huge fan of the whole sugar-daddy-sugar-babe-relationship ;) So, the last sentence made me grin.
Don't worry, it did no harm for your story being one huge piece instead of several chapters, I didn't mind at all.

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