Reviews for The Monster
Kathryn Claire O'Connor chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I like this!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
So good!
000Diana000 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
I don't normally read and enjoy short stories, but I really liked this one. Good job
lederra chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Good story.
soccerstar0198 chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
This was great :)
BettyBackInTheDay chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
You should be proud of this story. You knocked it out of the park! I love the tension Loki feels and Nat's sense of control while admitting her horrors. You kept them completely in character (at least my idea of their characters...). Very, very well done!
reader chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Very good.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
The ending was very clever! I can totally picture Natasha doing that. Great job!