like it! thanks for sharing!

Nicely told alternate version of Meat. There are just a few little grammar and spelling points that need tidying up, for example: you're, not "your", lose (as in don't want to be without) not "loose" (the opposite of tight); definitely not "definanty", and Jack's gun is a Wesley, not Weebil. Keep writing as these are small thing that improve with practice.

You call that Gwen bashing? And Gwen is a liar, a cheat, thinks she is better than them all.

Jack does love Ianto.
Owen is a good doctor.
Gwen is clueless. Any other job she would have been gone real fast.