Reviews for My Eyes |
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damienfarrar10 chapter 1 . 5/2 I like the beginning with the hokages rage |
MystiYew chapter 7 . 4/7 It's not actually half bad. The spelling and grammar drag it down a lot though, and I feel you should've spent more time developing his relationships so that we feel more of an impact when shisui dies. On the whole it's a good concept, executed relatively well, but really brought down by the poor English. |
MystiYew chapter 4 . 4/7 Really needs a proof read |
ManticoreBlues chapter 7 . 2/28 please continue, I love the fanfic |
ManticoreBlues chapter 1 . 2/17 please continue |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 3 . 2/9/2019 lol shisui's attitude is the same as mine. I am the oldest of my siblings, so I tend to get bragging rights over specific things that they can't do. I do something that is kind of basic in trigonometry, one of my siblings says: "Awesome!" My response usually is along the lines of "I know I am." |
Hardyblar chapter 7 . 11/26/2018 Wind and water release? Could make a Maelstrom style out that. |
Mc-Nugget13 chapter 7 . 8/1/2018 It would be nice to have more chapters, or have you abandoned this story? Because I personally enjoy it |
Ranmaleopard chapter 7 . 5/27/2018 This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next |
reptoholic chapter 7 . 10/30/2017 Love this story so far |
reptoholic chapter 6 . 10/30/2017 AWESOME |
reptoholic chapter 5 . 10/30/2017 NOOO |
reptoholic chapter 4 . 10/30/2017 I hope they don't all die! |
reptoholic chapter 3 . 10/30/2017 Keep it up |
reptoholic chapter 2 . 10/30/2017 Loving this so far. Keep up the great work. |