Oof but also -

Great start! Can't wait to see where this story goes.

This is my absolute favorite so far!
Oh my GOSH
I AM SO EXCITED
SHARKS
KISAME
TRAINING
ZABUZA
OH MY

I love that last moment!

Awwwwwww
I feel for her
We all can't be genius

Sounds so COOL

The descriptions of the Kiri lifestyle are really well thought out. I'm excited to learn more about her potential and her deepening relationship with Kisame. I'm looking forward to reading more!

This is pretty heartwarming for the Bloody Mist.

Really enjoying the bloodthirstiness of Kiri, you've done a great job of showing it without making it about everything and making people flat.

I'm liking the whole Kisame's sister thing. Not so much the freakout that is so common in SIs, but that's kinda the point of realizing you're in a fictional setting.

Am I a horrible person, that in my mind I am already shipping Kasumi with Itachi for future? I know it is VERY early in the plot, but given that Kisame actually cares for her, it is likely he would be overprotective. The only person I can see him approving of is his partner who gained his respect.
That aside, Kasumi has the knowledge of what is to come, and needs access to someone with the potential to actually make a difference in Madara and Zetsu's plots...

I like her relationship with kisame

So good. I love this fic. I also love your writing style.

This is absolutely adorable. I like how she doesn’t quite fit and isn’t a prodigy.

this is amazong. I can't wait for the next chapter!