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Wendyg63 chapter 27 . 8/1 Bravo. Thank you. |
Wendyg63 chapter 24 . 7/30 Wow. Very unexpected. Well written and powerful chapter. I really love your Bella. She’s strong and compassionate, fun and smart. |
Wendyg63 chapter 20 . 7/29 Ooo la la |
Wendyg63 chapter 16 . 7/29 Your Bella seems to have the most fun! |
Wendyg63 chapter 15 . 7/29 Nice! |
Wendyg63 chapter 14 . 7/29 A 4x king size bed - does that even possibly exist? Love it |
Wendyg63 chapter 13 . 7/29 I like Bella’s straight forward - this is it, this is me- no bullshit personality |
Wendyg63 chapter 12 . 7/29 I like your writing because you move the story along quickly and make things happen. Suddenly the Cullens are all in New York (that’s not easily accomplished). Thank you for keeping Leah true to form. Lol. Spilling her wine on Alice. |
Wendyg63 chapter 11 . 7/29 Everything that you created in this chapter is surprising, in a good way. I love Bella’s maturity and her decisions. Funny that Alice gets exposed as a less than worthy planner. |
Wendyg63 chapter 10 . 7/29 I love Rose’s POV. Great insight into her self worth and her belief that Bella is still a good person |
Wendyg63 chapter 9 . 7/29 I really appreciate how you’ve chosen to have Bella be a smart, stealthy woman. |
Wendyg63 chapter 8 . 7/29 Paul was the perfect partner for Bella in this situation. Shocking, news to say the least. |
Wendyg63 chapter 6 . 7/29 How sad - her lonely cab ride to the airport just punctuates her whole predicament |
Wendyg63 chapter 5 . 7/29 First - Bella wanting to experience Prom - as a rite of passage- blows my mind. Then of course - the complete change in relationships and plans - further surprises Loving your story |
Wendyg63 chapter 4 . 7/29 I really appreciate the fresh relationships that you’ve developed |