Ahhh this story is really good! Erika's dialogue is well thought out and I like her personality! I hope that you continue this story!

Well I've enjoyed this. Though sad it hasn't been updated for a while I'm glad I got to read something amazing today.

Wonder if she would be able to save Ace during the Marineford Arc/War of the Best. And when the Whitebeard Crew will crack through her exterior.

Hope this story isn't dead cuz it's really good!

I like it, I’m intrigued.
Can’t wait to read more!

I really like how well you showed her blindness, a lot of the time you read stories with blind protagonists who still use color. Her personality is also interested, I hope you write more someday but this was very good.

nice

Do you ever plan to update this because it is good.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

i hope you continue!

This character is an interesting addition to the list of OCs for One Piece stories. It isn't often you find an emotionless character that isn't canon.

I'm liking it.

Looking forward to the next update!
-Doodles

This is very interesting! :) I read your other story too, but admittedly, I like this character more. I'm excited to see more of her interactions with the Whitebeard crew, and more of her abilities explained perhaps. Hope you update soon! :)

Good chap, some grammar mistakes but none too bad.

I like the doc, love how she talks. She's funny xD

D'aww, she's arrived

Feel like you got a better grip on her character this chapter.
Bit of an "in-between", but still a good one to read.

Why does she cover her eyes if she is blind? Seems to be illogical unless there is something about them.

Just throwing this out there, but, was she allowed to pee while captive? o.O Or wash?
Otherwise she would've made one stinkin' disgusting captive.

One sentence that confused me: ..."in the cupboard, that they hers were." Some other spelling mistakes around as well.

I can't seem to figure out whether you intend for her to be a baby Spock or someone socially awkward? Because her speech patterns don't entirely match up at times, like two clashing personalities.

Otherwise, good start to a story Loved the piece with the cook, typical One Piece logic xD

Lovely start. I like the way you're going with the robotic Spock feeling.
Some slip-ups in that, she still displays too much emotion for that to be truly the thing.

Wondering who it is with her Have been out of the fandom for a bit, seriously behind with the manga and anime *woo is me*
Will there be spoilers concerning that part? Seeing as Whitebeard wouldn't be around for that part?

Good luck with the write.