Tid hissing at her boyfriend hiccup don't you dare move i will deal with you in a minute now author letn hs

well, it's going really good

I'm seeing n obvious inspiration from The Past Defines the Future, but I'm fine with that, and honestly, if you want any ideas on an original story feel free to PM me, I have a pretty good idea on one.

LOL, this become a little Dragonball z in the end but was fun, I see that this is the last chapter you did, hope that you continue some day. thanks for the story was good.

NICE CHAPTER, SO HICCUP NEW FRIEND FIND LOVE ON BERK.

good chapter, and a nice fight. thanks

This was a nice one, more original. thanks

I thing, for you first fic, that you have a good story in here, so if you have enough imagination you can do a great job by yourself. thanks

Good story cant wait to the next chapter/update to it if it happens

Love love love your story!

The plagiarism is very clear... or you can say that you are writing a fanfic on a fanfic... a fanfanfic?

Good chapter, I look forward to net update.

Loki? isn't he the God Of Pranks? Great, Amazing Story
Update Soon !

You know I don't even know why Snotlout's still part of the gang, he's nicer but it's that stupid ego of his

Is Gustav really Snot's cousin?

Okay wait a minute, wait a minute. So He told Her to go there and then ask her NOT to come back ?