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666thMystery chapter 15 . 10/18/2018 Very sad, what happened to Neville, but the story was very wonderful. I very much loved the development of Hermione and Draco's relationship, wasn't too sudden as with others, and also the development of their personal journies was sweet. |
KIMXLI chapter 13 . 6/22/2017 holy moly a long but an amazing chapter! the truth hurts but you did it in a way that made it a bitter sweet pain. FABULOUS! |
DyslexicDarling chapter 15 . 1/11/2017 a brilliant read. took me a while to get into but I am really very glad I stuck with it. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 14 . 1/11/2017 I am very glad that you wrote this chapter. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 13 . 1/11/2017 post war I really want them to be together! you have me in tears, but I am not really upset... it's the right choice. just heart wrenching. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 11 . 1/11/2017 I can't answer your question... I just so focused on what feelings must be awaiting this precarious pair. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 10 . 1/11/2017 I would totally have expected Ginny to give him a warning of some kind, but now at least there is an added element of ... er... uncertainty |
DyslexicDarling chapter 9 . 1/11/2017 I enjoyed that library chase, and the way she phrased her question was at least not embarrassing. I also really enjoyed the history of magic confrontation, Draco was very appealing there. sorry for the short reviews I was in a hurry to continue reading. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 8 . 1/11/2017 another very enjoyable chapter. thank you. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 7 . 1/11/2017 I really thoroughly enjoyed that chapter. just the right amount of everything and for a moment I was just as concerned as the characters involved. |
DyslexicDarling chapter 3 . 1/10/2017 I am enjoying this, but I find it really unbelievable how quickly they read these particular books. also who is pansy comparing herself to and why did it make Draco sick? I would like to be more privy to their private thoughts. |
SilverRiv chapter 15 . 2/12/2016 Dear writer, I just finished reading this fic last night. Here comes my review. I loved the concept and the way you executed it, the chapters got better and better the further I read. I would strongly suggest a betareader in the future since you do have quite big tense-problems. The present tense and past tense were constantly switching and it made the reading for me personally quite difficult. I also noticed many missing words (just small ones, like "the" or "and" or some such) and some spelling mistakes and forgotten word endings ("-ed" etc). Story-wise, though, it was really great! At first Draco seemed to me a bit too OOC, since we were talking about fifth year after all, and in cannon he was really an annoying prick the whole time through (even though your summary stated it was AU/assumed). But I felt intrigued enough about the premise of him reading muggle books that I stuck through the first few chapters and suddenly found myself really waiting forward to see what happens next. You somehow managed to draw me in and get emotionally invested. I literally cried in the last library scene, especially to the "you poor, beautiful, unfortunate soul". You managed to capture it so heartbreakingly, I sat up way past midnight to finish the whole thing, tears streaming down my face. So thank you, lovely writer, for bringing this amazing story to us, I'm glad you will never let Dramione sink, since I wouldn't let it happen. Keep on writing amazing stories for them, and I'd be glad to beta them for you if you wish :) Yours, ~ Riv |
pureangel86 chapter 15 . 10/14/2015 I absolutely adore this fanfic, however i did notice a few mistakes with tenses. Or it could be that I find anything in the present tense to be odd. Anyway this is so far from a silly story, it was will written with a complex plot that had me in tears by the end. |
NekoDarkHeart chapter 15 . 5/20/2015 Loved it. Well written. Dramoine is also one of my OTPs. Thanks for doing it justice |
chemicalflashes chapter 15 . 11/9/2014 You're such a talented author! I really loved reading your story. It is way too awesome! |