Reviews for The Lost Shinobi
Desoraptors chapter 2 . 7/22
I really think you are nerfing naruto like seriously naruto can destroy meteors easily in canon toneri destroyed the moon with one wttack so naruto is stronger then the satans
Guest chapter 2 . 1/13
Boring make no sense
Borello chapter 4 . 7/21/2019
the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.
Monster King chapter 4 . 8/15/2018
Great story please continue it I hope that you have not given up on it.
Jose19 chapter 3 . 11/15/2017
The Senjutsu in Dxd has a more powerful aspect than in the world of Naruto meaning the Space and Time aspect that even the people of Naruto wouldn't dream off but in general the Senjutsu of Naruto has its advantages but it wouldn't be bad for Naruto to learn this version either it could help him immensely.

The reason is that it relies on the lifeforce nature of the user, and Naruto has the strongest lifeforce of any character it could make him extremely powerful.
El Umbral Oscuro chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
lol algunos comentarios me hacen reír con las PERLAS que salen como esta ''el Chakra viene de una entidad muy aparte'' cuando eso es una burrada y tienen cero comprensión lectora para poder entender el Manga en general. la otra PERLA que se mandan es que creen que Kurama es un ''Demonio'' lol cuando en realidad el es un ente de Energía pura o como en Naruto le llaman Chakra. Dejando eso aparte, el fanfic como lo veo parece ser que le bajaste o nerfeastes demasiado al Uzumaki en general y lo otro es que estas mal al creer que el Uzumaki no va a sentir Energía de otro seres en especial el de HSDxD y sino es así y solo lo haces para que el Uzumaki sea un misterio de que tan poderoso es para este verse no hay problema alguno con esa idea claro si es esto ultimo, pero si es lo primero es un fail que tendrías que arreglar pero como dices que ya no tienes ganas de continuarlo por algunos comentarios xD, pues solo te agradezco por tu paciencia y dedicación en este fanfic y suerte en lo que hagas. Saludos
Kaze no Ryuu kami chapter 3 . 7/29/2017
The last part of him being in heaven makes no sense
shadow chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
I liked the chapter!
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 12/7/2016
Sigue
king gilgamesh chapter 3 . 8/30/2016
it sucks i dont know why but the story in itself isnt that captivatin, i mean its original yeah but its also boring
grimreaper40045 chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
naruto was able to understand the kyuubi seal just by looking at so he's better than adept
thor94 chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
naruto become a really skilled sensor during the war.
kindasortastantheman chapter 4 . 11/29/2015
I have to agree with you that this site is seriously fucked up in some places. Have you ever looked under the NarutoXInuyasha crossovers before?
Artemis-Ikana chapter 4 . 11/29/2015
Goodbye Waffles.
TheGrammarNaziIsHere chapter 4 . 11/28/2015
i will not deny that 90% of the people on this site are backwards as fuck.
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