Aaaah! Seriously though, I love your writing. One thing, Park's eyes are green. But still. So much emotion! I love your writing... Please update. Unless you don't want to. Honestly, no pressure. Thanks for writing this fantastic story! (Sorry for the scattered review)

Yes, that was close to something i would have wanted the sequel, if there was going to be one, to start like. That sounded like Park, you know what i mean? there is a sound to all Rowell's charachers that i am drawn to and never want to stop listening to them. This was great. Hoping to hear more.

please update once or twice more ;_; give me and all the readers closure. That ending to 16 was cruel ;_;

This is perfect...3

Omg! I can't wait for the next chapter

GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

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If that was Park who said hi, (and I'm pretty sure it was), he has green eyes just so you know:) pretty good so far though, aside from park killing richie...I just don't see him doing that no matter how miserable and bitter he was by the end of the book but its your story after all so you do as you please:) any chance you can check out my crossover of eleanor and park and fangirl as a continuation of both novels? It would mean a lot and reviews always make me smile:)

Pleaseeeeeee write more! Your story is very intriguing and i want to read more:)

I liked this chapter, Park is becoming better and better at this...
I really want more
Happy writing!

This was the best one yet. Keep up the great work! :)

Eh, I just read through a bunch of chapters, they were all awesome. But they were sixteen, its been five years...they're twenty-one...school? Eh whatever. Good chappie.

This is touching. Enough said.

Happiness erupts from me, Eleanor is coming back.
These chapters are so shorts I want to read so much more. Okayz on to the next chapter.

Park...
Good job, you made a great choice by killing Richie, that way other things could happen :)