The cake is a lie - Portal

Props for using the word 'penultimate' properly.

Can you please stop censoring the words? Like the F-Bomb I can understand since it’s a T rated story, but everything else is completely fine as long as you don’t use the S-word all that much. Things like God, Dammit, Hell, and the others are fine.

Palps is gonna be smacked down if he thinks that he can get a Spartan Armor. Pretty sure that they all have a small bomb imbedded in them that is set to detonate and render the armor into nothing more then scrap metal by destroying everything that makes the Armor more then a suit of Titanium. Can't wait for the Umbarra campaign. and I was wondering if you wanted a new class of ship for the UNSC that should help fill the gap in CQB with the ships.

Not really a review but more of a question, shouldn't they be able to move the UNSC people like they do to inanimated objects and non living things like droids, as Yoda said in ep V the Force is around everything, even the land and the ship.

So what year is it? 2558 or 59? You got them mixed up

For almost 3 years thank you for updating

The way you written the dynamic between Sarge and Fives makes me believe they’ll become friends over the course of the Umbara arc. Can’t wait to see how much shit Will has to go through with Krell when he arrives.

You gotta stop using asterisks, it's really annoying. Things like God, damn, its unneeded. F & S I'd understand, but you're going a bit overboard. Go big or go home. Rules were made to be broken.

So Not sure how much you are aware of how Slugthrowers act in the SW Galaxy. But they are the Perfect Jedi/Sith killing tools. they can't be blocked due to their speed, and if a Jedi/sith manages to catch one it will just melt and spew molten metal into the jedi/sith. Also, the Droideka's shields don't stop physical objects. that's why rolling a grenade into them works. their shields stop all forms of energy weapons, including Plasma. A Bullet would go right through the shield.

There were a couple instances where I wondered if you were running out of ideas, the biggest being the discussion between the ODSTs and Fives. That said, this chapter was well worth the wait. I cannot wait to see what you have planned next chapter.

Please add Avery J Johnson he didn’t deserve to die in halo 3

So you buffed Lightsaber wielders? Why can her arms move faster than the speed of sound?
It makes sense that they can block blasters because of how slow the projectiles are. But bullets go many times faster.

Nice to see you back. Interesting as always

"a furious beast from ****."
Are you censoring the word hell? Why?