This was amazing!

I wonder what Gray would’ve done if Lyon showed up and tried to get Juvia!

I fucking hate Gray in this story. Love this story but I hate Gray. The word "dick" is not strong enough to describe how horrible he was being to Juvia and I personally believe he should not have been forgiven so easily. Juvia was literally masking her emotional and practically in physical PAIN with a smile in front of everyone while all Gray was doing was entertaining his old friend. Sure, Juvia snapped at his a few times but I mean who wouldn't? He literally told her to fucking change. I hate him. How can he say he loves her when he tells her he wants her to be different? Fucking bullshit. Every tear Juvia cried over him was not worth it. What good is taking her rain away if he's just going to bring it back with his bitchyness. Fucking asshole.

This made me cry T_T

I LOVE IT... MUCH

For 'Blackbird', I think if you play Just A Dream whilre reading, there's a 99.99% chance you'll cry. Espicially when I got to when Juvia was crying on the bench and it played 'If ever loved someone put your hands up'. AMAZING STORY!

This was beautiful. Nothing more; just beautiful.

this jaylina character's a bit delusional...whatever...i'm glad for the sequel

I hate gossip like this about relationships and stuff not saying I don't partake in gossip but I hate relationship gossip.

I'm a huge huge Gruvia shipper and while I enjoy stories with Gray falling in love with Juvia in a quickened pace, I admire how "realistic" this is. Obviously we don't know Gray's real intentions right now, but from what we know I think this is very close to how Gray actually feels. It actually sometimes bothers me when some authors put Gray way OOC because I don't find it realistic, and it's the easy way out. I truly do admire how you took the time to plan this out instead of rushing their relationship. It's short, but really nice.

This is so perfect. U did so well portraying them. Juvia is a bit clingy but she's honestly so pure hearted and Gray is a bit of a douche at times.
This bring out a lot of emotions in me haha.
I had just wish Juvia wouldn't be super forgiving like she is here and make him work for it a bit but we all know that honestly isn't her. Her one flaw is probably loving Gray too much.
Good job!

i'm a big gruvia shipper and i love christina perri so thank you for writing this and sharing it to the world...

Great! Can't wait for the story from Gray's perspective. I'm really curious on why he said what he said in the first place...
By the way, while you're at it, why don't you just make some lemon (well, you did hint that here and there...but if that happen, not all people can read the story)?
Hahaha...just ignore me, I kind of over-excited for the continuation here...

Ahh that was nice. I wonder why Gray was acting like that though. I really like this story! I hope you post up the one in Gray's perspective :)

Wow, I enjoyed reading this! Glad that it had a happy ending.

Please, do a sequel. I need to understand WHY Gray acted sooooo cold with Juvia, since that was their date, and he knew she was clingy for a long time.
Even with this beeeeeautiful ending (I loved it *-*), if Juvia could forgive him, I couldn't! C'mon, he was laughing and trying to replace her with that Jaylina girl, while Juvia was suffering A LOT! I'm so done with him gfkdkfkdfkdkfkdkfkdkfdk THAT JERK!
Anyway, I loooved the story, seriously. I almost cried with Juvia, because it is sad when a couple break up, and they still love each other :c
I'm waiting for the sequel!